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Timmy blew some bubbles and he watched them Pop! Pop! Pop! But one went higher than the trees and right over the top That one big bubble floated high as though it couldn’t stop And just before it reached the sky it then began to drop Timmy stood and marvelled at the colours in its skin How could skin so very thin have all those colours in It came down low and bounced right off a nearby wheelie bin To land on Timmy’s shoulder and that really made him grin For Timmy’s at a new school so he walks alone today He hasn’t any friends with whom to talk along the way The bubble on his shoulder sat as though it wants to play And still the bubble didn’t pop which brightened up his day Now when nobody talks to you it’s easy to pretend So Timmy just imagined that he had a bubble friend He hoped the bubble wouldn’t pop for school’s just round the bend And no more would he sit alone and wait for school to end He walked into his morning class and Suzie Laine was there She was very pretty and had very lovely hair She said I like your bubble, I don’t know if you’re aware This desk isn’t taken, why don’t you pull up a chair The bubble on his shoulder did a funny little hop It landed on his desk and and made a funny little ‘Plop!’ He and Suzie giggled as it hopped and didn’t stop But can a bubble smile? This one did and then went Pop!

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Date: 7/25/2021 5:58:00 PM
Matchmaker, matchmaker, matchmaker me. Timmy and Suzie. The bubble pops -- Wheeeee! ~ Oy, gw
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Date: 7/26/2021 2:30:00 AM
That’s good that, Gershon. Have you considered writing poetry? ;-) Terry
Date: 7/25/2021 2:05:00 PM
what a charming poem, terry! who would have thought a soap bubble could be the inspiration for a poem? oh, you did! thank you!
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Date: 7/25/2021 2:18:00 PM
Hi, Ilene. Right now I’d happily take inspiration from a smelly sock, but I have to say a bubble lent itself rather more to the nursery rhyme it inspired. ;-) Terry
Date: 7/25/2021 11:27:00 AM
So did your great-granddaughter put a gold star on your forehead for this one? Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/25/2021 12:19:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Rico. Not been on soup a lot for a few days. Nothing much gelling right now. Might be time for something bizarre to jangle the brain cells. Terry
Date: 7/24/2021 5:33:00 PM
Aw, what a cute one, Terry. Nice work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It would be good to read to a kid who thinks he has no friends.
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Date: 7/25/2021 12:10:00 PM
Thanks, Milt. Frankly I was just glad to get some words down. Most of what I’m writing I’m ditching, not even saving to come back to. Sooner or later something will click and I wont be able to type fast enough. Terry
Date: 7/24/2021 1:15:00 PM
Enjoyed your verse Terry, kids would love stories like this. Hope your weekend is going well, thankfully it's Cooled down, im not built for the heat, give me the artic any day. Tom
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Date: 7/24/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. With inspiration coming and going and the one poem I’m working on seemingly at an impasse, I was pleased, today, when my great granddaughter blew some bubbles of which a few didn’t burst upon landing. At least it got pen to paper. Terry

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