The Brown Recluse

The Brown Recluse, its pathway goes
Past radiator’s stanchion rows
On to the corner, up the wall
Across the ceiling then to fall
Upon my bed. But no one knows.

This silent killer never slows
When seeking prey, seeing all,
No soul sparing, and few recall
The Brown Recluse!

On some its horrid bite bestows
Necrotic death that ever grows,
Consuming flesh, a spreading gall,
Oh hear and heed my urgent call!
Hunt down this pest, then fast depose
The Brown Recluse.

July 5, 2017
Rondeau form
For “Form R” contest
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Manassian Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Oi....so this was tough for one who has arachnophobia like me. The only thing beautiful here, is your way with words! ;) Great write.
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Well-written--and on an interesting topic, Dean! Spiders and snakes--nightmare inducers! Janice
Wood Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thanks Janice. This is my first go at a Rondeau. Kind of fun! - Dean
Cozart Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 4:34 PM
I HATE SPIDERS!!! I haven't seen brown recluse around here nor much of black widows, but I kill them on site(and all the others). And so should you. If you suffer the bite and die I can't read your poetry anymore. Think of it as charity.
Wood Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 11:18 AM
hehe, thank you for your concern for my well being. I promise to keep and eye out for trouble. -- Dean
Borke Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 4:07 PM
I believe they are smart, too; which makes me despise them more.
Wood Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 11:11 AM
No that is a scary thought. I hope its not true. Thanks for taking time to comment Hannah. - Dean
Borke Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 4:05 PM
I always think the blind person suffers the most. It occurred to me that they're at a terrible disadvantage to not know where the spiders are. Let's thank Him for sight and hope HE provides a solution to give sight to the blind.
Wanter Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 4:04 PM
I just read Robert Lindley's poem about a lion getting torn apart, and now spiders! Gory evening, but fun to read. I grew up having to watch for black widows, scorpions, centipedes, ad infinitim!
Wood Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Didn't mean to upset anyone. I have the same critters in my area that we have to watch for. Thanks for the comment. - Dean
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