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The Brown Recluse

The Brown Recluse, its pathway goes Past radiator’s stanchion rows On to the corner, up the wall Across the ceiling then to fall Upon my bed. But no one knows. This silent killer never slows When seeking prey, seeing all, No soul sparing, and few recall The Brown Recluse! On some its horrid bite bestows Necrotic death that ever grows, Consuming flesh, a spreading gall, Oh hear and heed my urgent call! Hunt down this pest, then fast depose The Brown Recluse. July 5, 2017 Rondeau form For “Form R” contest Sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 7/9/2017 9:24:00 AM
Oi....so this was tough for one who has arachnophobia like me. The only thing beautiful here, is your way with words! ;) Great write.
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Date: 7/8/2017 3:49:00 PM
Well-written--and on an interesting topic, Dean! Spiders and snakes--nightmare inducers! Janice
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/8/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Janice. This is my first go at a Rondeau. Kind of fun! - Dean
Date: 7/5/2017 4:34:00 PM
I HATE SPIDERS!!! I haven't seen brown recluse around here nor much of black widows, but I kill them on site(and all the others). And so should you. If you suffer the bite and die I can't read your poetry anymore. Think of it as charity.
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Date: 7/6/2017 11:18:00 AM
hehe, thank you for your concern for my well being. I promise to keep and eye out for trouble. -- Dean
Date: 7/5/2017 4:07:00 PM
I believe they are smart, too; which makes me despise them more.
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Date: 7/6/2017 11:11:00 AM
No that is a scary thought. I hope its not true. Thanks for taking time to comment Hannah. - Dean
Date: 7/5/2017 4:05:00 PM
I always think the blind person suffers the most. It occurred to me that they're at a terrible disadvantage to not know where the spiders are. Let's thank Him for sight and hope HE provides a solution to give sight to the blind.
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Date: 7/5/2017 4:04:00 PM
I just read Robert Lindley's poem about a lion getting torn apart, and now spiders! Gory evening, but fun to read. I grew up having to watch for black widows, scorpions, centipedes, ad infinitim!
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Date: 7/6/2017 11:10:00 AM
Didn't mean to upset anyone. I have the same critters in my area that we have to watch for. Thanks for the comment. - Dean

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