The Broken Ride - Monoku3 Earth

The Broken Ride as the earth spins round, the dizzy riders are sick ~ no one rides for free Contest: Monoku3 Earth Sponsor: Silent One 12/30/2017 First Place

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Date: 1/4/2018 10:30:00 PM
Wonderful Monoku, Jeffrey - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:59:00 PM
Thank you Gregory! Happy New Year! Jeffrey
Date: 1/3/2018 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jeffrey, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thank you Eve! I am glad you liked it. Jeffrey
Date: 1/2/2018 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations Jeff!
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
Thank you Jack!
Date: 1/2/2018 10:25:00 AM
Jeffery Congratulations on your top WIN !!! Regards, Sathya
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
Thank you Sathya!
Date: 1/2/2018 9:52:00 AM
No free lunch...congratulations Jeffery
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
I don't mind paying for my own lunch but I don't want to pay for everyone else's too. Thanks for your comment!
Date: 1/2/2018 9:30:00 AM
Interesting as a monoku should be! Congrats on your win, Jeffrey.
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Line, I'm glad you liked it! Jeffrey
Date: 1/1/2018 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations Jeffrey on your first place win!! Well done!! ~ Judy
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/2/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Judy!
Date: 1/1/2018 4:17:00 PM
An intriguing and thoughtful write Jeffrey. Congratulations for your wonderful first place win... ~Susan
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Date: 1/1/2018 3:54:00 PM
VERY profound message in yours. I like this a lot. Congrats, Jeffrey, on your number one win.
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/2/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! I am glad you enjoyed it. Jeffrey
Date: 1/1/2018 12:42:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 1st place in the contest, Jeffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/1/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine!
Date: 1/1/2018 12:08:00 PM
So true.. Great one liner Jeffrey...Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/1/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, SO! I like these Monoku's. They are quick, to the point and fun. Thanks for opening my eyes to them. Jeffrey
Date: 12/30/2017 9:11:00 AM
Jeffrey, unfortunately we must all ride the ride, there is only one way off. Best wishes for the new year. John
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 12/30/2017 6:01:00 PM
Hi John. We just need to make the best of it and everything will be all right. Happy New Year! Jeffrey
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 12/30/2017 6:01:00 PM
Hi John. We just need to make the best of it and everything will be all right. Happy New Year! Jeffrey
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