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The Broken Ride - Monoku3 Earth

The Broken Ride as the earth spins round, the dizzy riders are sick ~ no one rides for free Contest: Monoku3 Earth Sponsor: Silent One 12/30/2017 First Place

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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2018 10:30:00 PM
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Wonderful Monoku, Jeffrey - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:59:00 PM
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Thank you Gregory! Happy New Year! Jeffrey
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/3/2018 12:29:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win, Jeffrey, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:58:00 PM
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Thank you Eve! I am glad you liked it. Jeffrey
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/2/2018 11:12:00 PM
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Congratulations Jeff!
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
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Thank you Jack!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 1/2/2018 10:25:00 AM
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Jeffery Congratulations on your top WIN !!! Regards, Sathya
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
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Thank you Sathya!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/2/2018 9:52:00 AM
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No free lunch...congratulations Jeffery
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
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I don't mind paying for my own lunch but I don't want to pay for everyone else's too. Thanks for your comment!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/2/2018 9:30:00 AM
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Interesting as a monoku should be! Congrats on your win, Jeffrey.
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/5/2018 9:54:00 PM
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Thank you Line, I'm glad you liked it! Jeffrey
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Judith S
Date: 1/1/2018 5:14:00 PM
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Congratulations Jeffrey on your first place win!! Well done!! ~ Judy
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/2/2018 5:38:00 AM
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Thank you Judy!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/1/2018 4:17:00 PM
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An intriguing and thoughtful write Jeffrey. Congratulations for your wonderful first place win... ~Susan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/1/2018 3:54:00 PM
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VERY profound message in yours. I like this a lot. Congrats, Jeffrey, on your number one win.
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/2/2018 5:36:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea! I am glad you enjoyed it. Jeffrey
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2018 12:42:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your great 1st place in the contest, Jeffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/1/2018 1:08:00 PM
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Thank you Sunshine!
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2018 12:08:00 PM
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So true.. Great one liner Jeffrey...Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 1/1/2018 1:07:00 PM
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Thank you, SO! I like these Monoku's. They are quick, to the point and fun. Thanks for opening my eyes to them. Jeffrey
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/30/2017 9:11:00 AM
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Jeffrey, unfortunately we must all ride the ride, there is only one way off. Best wishes for the new year. John
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 12/30/2017 6:01:00 PM
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Hi John. We just need to make the best of it and everything will be all right. Happy New Year! Jeffrey
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Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 12/30/2017 6:01:00 PM
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Hi John. We just need to make the best of it and everything will be all right. Happy New Year! Jeffrey

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