The Broken Mirror


In my dream-
     there is a broken mirror
        it is so gorgeous and wood-framed
          but is shattered.
     It stands in an ancient room and is beyond repair.
The mirror a reminder
     of beauty
       that is fading, or perhaps a death.
Oh, it could be grief, decay and withering away.
I have plenty of that within my soul,
    or it could be accepting aging      
represented by that ancient room,
      as nothing is forever in this life.
Oh, I am afraid of this dream as it is full of unknown,
           let me fly back now to my cozy bed
a girl sleeping . . . 

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December 1, 2016

Poetry/Verse/The Broken Mirror
Copyright Protected, ID 16-854-479-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the Contest 244,
sponsor, Brian Strand

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/4/2016 4:00:00 PM
Another beauty here. You got two for two. Wow!!
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings. :)
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations !
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Date: 12/2/2016 12:12:00 PM
I'll bet you are beautiful at any age, Constance:) The broken mirror is a wonderful metaphor!
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Date: 12/2/2016 11:13:00 AM
It appears I'm not the only one who saw herself in this poem. Sometimes I feel like breaking mirrors. Very poignant!! The site is giving me problems. Hope I can send Soup mail
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Date: 12/2/2016 7:53:00 AM
I am aging too and this poem by you spoke eloquently to me.
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Date: 12/1/2016 9:41:00 PM
A mirror is only a reflection . . . it will never show the true inner beauty . . . that little girl inside. Your images were awesome.
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Date: 12/1/2016 7:10:00 PM
Beautifully done. How can it be that at times there is such beauty in sadness?
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Date: 12/1/2016 6:10:00 PM
Oh, BW, so close to home. Skillfully said.
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