The Broken Language of Love

The language of love is wordless.

See that simple yellow and white daisy
in the green meadow?
Go uproot it,
snatch it from its perfect setting
that place Perfection made for it.

Now it is in your hand,
it is still lovely,
but something is missing,
something is wrong.
it was never meant to be manhandled,
even with appreciation or love,
that kind of love is possessive,
selfish, mistaken.

You must seek to understand it,
describe it, know it.
You must investigate, and dissect
its beauty
and so you begin to pull is apart.
petal by petal
you despoil it,
until the flower no longer exists
as a whole vision,
as a perfection of form.

It is only parts now, it is only words,
words for love,
and not love itself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Hello Eric, yes it goes like this. He loves me , He loves me not until all the white is gone and the last words are He loves me not. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Hello Eric, i thought ao. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Ashford Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Darlene, yes that's the way of it. Bless E
Merryman Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Fantastic analogy and message, Eric! Blessings, Kim M
Ashford Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Much obliged to you for the feedback Kim. Always appreciated. E
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