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The Broken Language of Love

The language of love is wordless. See that simple yellow and white daisy in the green meadow? Go uproot it, snatch it from its perfect setting that place Perfection made for it. Now it is in your hand, it is still lovely, but something is missing, something is wrong. it was never meant to be manhandled, even with appreciation or love, that kind of love is possessive, selfish, mistaken. You must seek to understand it, describe it, know it. You must investigate, and dissect its beauty and so you begin to pull is apart. petal by petal you despoil it, until the flower no longer exists as a whole vision, as a perfection of form. It is only parts now, it is only words, words for love, and not love itself.

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Date: 7/17/2023 7:38:00 AM
How fascinating to explore this dissection of love - everyone wants to understand and reduces it to mere description in the process - wonderful!
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Date: 7/15/2023 4:12:00 PM
Hello Eric, yes it goes like this. He loves me , He loves me not until all the white is gone and the last words are He loves me not. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2023 10:21:00 AM
Hello Eric, i thought ao. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/16/2023 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Darlene, yes that's the way of it. Bless E
Date: 7/15/2023 10:29:00 AM
Fantastic analogy and message, Eric! Blessings, Kim M
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/16/2023 9:33:00 AM
Much obliged to you for the feedback Kim. Always appreciated. E

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