The Brightest Star

A speck of sand dust on the land Is not what I am... I am the brightest star in the universal plan ~ For I am Man

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/12/2023 2:50:00 PM

You know, sometimes I wonder if we really are a "bright star"; the harm we've done to one another, our world; we have the potential to be that bright, but I fear that too many prefer to be destructive. We are quite a paradox, humans.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2023 7:44:00 PM

I always found Kildare and Ben Casey to be a par-a-dox.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/11/2023 2:47:00 PM

So true, the first verse when we are lost in the chaos of ego, and the the second true as we allow the power and light of our authentic selp to shine through. Well written my friend. Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2023 8:00:00 PM

If you think you are important, then you will be. If you think you are impotent --- (You can finish this one. lol).

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/11/2023 11:54:00 AM

Indeed you are Gershon, first the bad news only 7 billion others like you on this planet, but now the good news that is exactly what you mean, cheers David

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2023 8:01:00 PM

That's great news, actually, David. If 7 billion like me, I shall run for public office! lol.