The Brightest Star

A speck of sand
    dust on the land
  Is not what I am...

  I am the brightest star
    in the universal plan
      ~ For I am Man
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Kiser Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:50 PM
You know, sometimes I wonder if we really are a "bright star"; the harm we've done to one another, our world; we have the potential to be that bright, but I fear that too many prefer to be destructive. We are quite a paradox, humans.
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 7:44 PM
I always found Kildare and Ben Casey to be a par-a-dox.
Baker Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 2:47 PM
So true, the first verse when we are lost in the chaos of ego, and the the second true as we allow the power and light of our authentic selp to shine through. Well written my friend. Bill
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 8:00 PM
If you think you are important, then you will be. If you think you are impotent --- (You can finish this one. lol).
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Indeed you are Gershon, first the bad news only 7 billion others like you on this planet, but now the good news that is exactly what you mean, cheers David
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 8:01 PM
That's great news, actually, David. If 7 billion like me, I shall run for public office! lol.
M  Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 12:17 AM
You are Wolf Man!!! and you shine incredibly bright my lovely funny cheeky friend!! Debx
M  Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 11:37 PM
Cheeky she was not….cheeky you are!!
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Perhaps I am even 'cheekier' than Julie Andrew was, singing to the mirror in 'Mary Poppins.' Remember that?! :) gw
Tor Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 11:22 PM
You are the brightest star my friend. God thinks so...
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 8:04 PM
Actually, I just reflect your glow, Michael. Keep on shining, my friend!
DiMino Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 3:04 PM
True, and mighty declaration! I agree!
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 8:04 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm, Joe!
Sands Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Keep shining Gershon. Great writing. Strong and positive :)
Hawkins Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:27 PM
And an incredibly kind Hu man, indeed. Lovely rhyme. Take care, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Very kind of YOU, Shirley. Thank you, my friend. :) gw
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