The Bridge of Hope

At the foot bridge, I linger; an hour goes
while again confronted I am with foes.

Deterrent are they, none but my own doubts; 
each from imagination of mine, again sprouts.

Holding my feet once more in grips of iron,
forbidding me those dreams of life that beckon.

Sad, I stare at grass greener on the other side, 
longing as yet for courage to leave all aside.

To this bridge of hope, surely I will come again
to cry over lame failures in this one bargain!


Re-submitted 24/09/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Nice one. And I agree with Victor. It's an emotive piece which makes it so nice.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Thanks Andrea. I'm glad you enjoyed it. So many times we are confronted with the dilemma to cross or not to cross...fate...:) Sunita
Turner Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Lovely poetry, Sunita.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Thanks Daniel for going through. :)
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