The Bridge

The Bridge


I used to stand on that bridge,
light up a cigarette, 
and just think.
Look out into the never ending sky,
and count clouds.
Stare at the muddy water, 
and wonder
just how far down it goes.
I contemplated death on that bridge.
Crying invisible tears, 
hating life,
wondering if I had the guts to end it all.
I didn't.
Instead,
I watched the silver fish swim by.
With no worries,
just doing what fish do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 3:54 PM
I loved the intricate simplicity of your write, great work Sonia...
Trimmingham  Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Sands Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 1:14 PM
So outwardly expressive and beautiful ending! Very well done.
Trimmingham  Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much for your comment. It is greatly appreciated.
Green Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:59 PM
This was fantastic, it is o matter of fact and in your face but that ending really hits home. I enjoyed this immensely, you have a wonderful talent in expressing feelings and emotions. Very, very good.
Trimmingham  Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Wow, thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment. This truly made my day.
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