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THE BRIDE’S DREAMS - VIGNETTE

sweet smell of her envy perfume drowned that stench of betrayal play stygian smile blurred by church-white veil her heart habitually astray

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/13/2025 8:07:00 AM

Not all dreams come true. I enjoy reading your poem.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/13/2025 5:59:00 PM

Thank you for your pleasant visit dear poet. I am glad you liked the write, I just tried poet Suzette Richards's prompt of 'The Bride Trilogy' contest. thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/12/2025 3:07:00 PM

A gripping poem, that's so well written; the tale of marriage beginning on a sad note. I hope your day is wonderful, Thriveni.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/12/2025 9:11:00 PM

I don't usually write on dark-themes dear friend, this is my first try for poet Suzette Richards's prompt of 'The Bride Trilogy' contest. Human psyche is unfathomable. Thank you for the kind visit and blessings, your visit means so much to me. thank you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/12/2025 7:47:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive, Thriveni. Lord help the man who marries such a woman! Janice

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/12/2025 9:08:00 PM

This is my first such dark-write dear friend, I usually don't walk into dark emotions, I wrote this for poet Suzette Richards's prompt of 'The Bride Trilogy'. Tough one though, gave it a try. Thank you for your kind visit and precious time dear poet. Cheers