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The Breezing Spirit

The Breezing Spirit The breezing spirit against the wind flying with its highs and lows. December 9, 2015 Contest: One Liners 4 Sponsor: Silent One

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Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 12:59:00 PM

BALVEEN, Congratulations on your wonderful one line win. SKAT

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/14/2015 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Skat!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/13/2015 1:40:00 AM

Life people living through their every day - I like this very much ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/13/2015 2:00:00 AM

Yeah! We are constantly crossing hurdles- our daily victories and failures! Thanks CayCay! Love...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/11/2015 3:09:00 PM

Wonderful one liner writes, Balveen, congratulations on your win!!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/13/2015 2:00:00 AM

Thanks Eve! Love....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/10/2015 11:33:00 PM

Congrats on wonderful write n win Balveen!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/11/2015 2:52:00 AM

Thanks Upma!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/10/2015 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/11/2015 2:53:00 AM

Thanks Nayda!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2015 7:10:00 AM

- Balveen, a great line to contest: One liners 4! - Congrats and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/10/2015 7:26:00 AM

Anne, many, many thanks! Love.....

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/9/2015 11:07:00 AM

A superb one-liner Balveen! Lovely imagery and language. Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/9/2015 11:49:00 AM

...you are very talented my friend! Keith

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/9/2015 11:20:00 AM

Thanks Keith! You are very appreciative!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/9/2015 6:53:00 AM

Lovely take on the sports theme - good luck Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/9/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thanks Jan for your wishes and love! Love....