The Breath Taking ( Part One )

The Breath Taking
 
This clean air we breathe hides a murdering
a disguised choking filled with acids insidious burning
slow corrosion of lung and tree 
infecting the inviting honesty 
of the rose

The breath taking
 
Oil leaking death is approaching 
spreading its deadly secret 
through renowned civilised plasticoncrete
falling poisons reside in the clouds 
breathing photochemicals
there is no truth in reflecting blues 
of rain puddles
more a bile transpired sheen 
from gas puking chimneys
vomiting chemical shrouds onto the greenery

The breath taking 
 
Suckling in tune on these electrified teats 
of this callous immaculate conception
humanity slowly bleeds from its own dead lakes 
of industrial landfilled waste 
dumped the luxury of living green 
enslavement to the machine
flows pollutant through malicious veins 
that were once river arteries
now feeding cursed worlds of trash desolation
driving the Earth to the point of breaking

The breath taking
 
Fools 
sipping this predetermined nectar of refining
predicting in the next generation 
a steady use for contaminating
thinking only in terms of the quality 
and immediate lining
in the pockets of their progressive suites
enclosed in safe penthouse vampire worlds
securely dreaming the corporate design
belching as they go the oil slick bigotry
choosing filth 
to drink the waters of purity
condemning all which they no longer understand
their cold steel puppets of cancer
grow tall with the eyes of skyscrapers
which view from the edge of this abyss
and avoid the extinct they no longer miss

The breath taking !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/26/2008 10:40:00 AM
Colin going to the next part of this passion of your's. I realize how much you care for mother earth. How you feel about man's neglect in protecting her instead of abusing and destroying her. You have certainly conveyed this in a a strong, emotional, and passionate way. Your friend Michael Torres.
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