The Breath Of Summer: Saturnian II--SCHEMATICS ONLY
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Poetic Form: Personification/Saturnian
Inspired: 2024 August 07
Image: N/A
SATURNIAN II, SHOWS THE BREAKDOWN VALUE
OF SUM & SUBSTANCE OF SATURNIAN POETRY
Saturnian: Old Versification form, quantitative and accentual.
LEGEND
U = Light, - = Heavy, UUt = Light/Heavy, || = Caesura, X = Verse End
A stretched gloaming tethers creation in a
U - - U || U UUt U U - || U - X
daystar's wake ... askew parts The Old Guitarist
U U - || U UUt - || U U U U - X
ebbing lambent stars strung to a yarn of spring ...
U - - U - || UUt - U || UUt - - X
'Tis the volley of calendrical crasis
U - UUt - || - U U U UUt || U - X
poised to a youthful Einstein that subtracts from
U - - UUt UUt || U - U || U - - X
the sum and substance whence summer makes a splash ...
U U - || U - || U U UUt || - - U X
The advent of an enchanting star dulls a
U U - || - - || - U U UUt || - - X
chant that the Khanate only stains upon its
U - - || U - - - || U - - - X
Golden Horde smolders beneath befriending clouds ...
U U U || U - U - || U UUt - - X
A whiff that slights Aurelius' bearings yet
U U || - - || U U U U UUT || - - U X
still trifles a chalk absence to the presence
- U - || - - || U - - || - U - X
of cheese that embellishes the languid tracing ...
- - - || U U U U || - U - U - X
The shallow space of bards decreed a crowning
U - - - - || U U U || - U - X
flock of teary favoring san tissues of
U - U - || U - - || - U - - X
lissome verdancy choral ode vibrant charms ...
U - U U U || U U U || U - - X
Worshipped effervescent microscopic dew
U - U - U - || U - U - - X
bringing into being just one bell prayers
U - U - U - || - - || - U - X
bearing fruits of promise in globule water ...
U - U - || U - - || U UUt U - X
Petrichor emanates to a hoverance
U - - U - - || U - || U - UUt X
wisp claim as wandering brevity stands still
U - - || U - - U - - || - - X
amidst a sonder of souls ventured threshold ...
U - U U - || U UUt || U UUt U - X
Gold beams glimpsed a bevy coup of a vast crest
U - - || - U - - || - - || U UUt X
as the dripping stalled in evaporating
- - U - || - - || U - - U - X
stares chase a clinked rainbow flaunts with ... creation.
U U - || U U - || - - || U - U X
A stretched gloaming tethers creation in a
daystar's wake ... askew parts The Old Guitarist
ebbing lambent stars strung to a yarn of spring ...
'Tis the volley of calendrical crasis
poised to a youthful Einstein that subtracts from
the sum and substance whence summer makes a splash ...
The advent of an enchanting star dulls a
chant that the Khanate only stains upon its
Golden Horde smolders beneath befriending clouds ...
A whiff that slights Aurelius' bearings yet
still trifles a chalk absence to the presence
of cheese that embellishes the languid tracing ...
The shallow space of bards decreed a crowning
flock of teary favoring san tissues of
lissome verdancy choral ode vibrant charms ...
Worshipped effervescent microscopic dew
bringing into being just one bell prayers
bearing fruits of promise in globule water ...
Petrichor emanates to a hoverance
wisp claim as wandering brevity stands still
amidst a sonder of souls ventured threshold ...
Gold beams glimpsed a bevy coup of a vast crest
as the dripping stalled in evaporating
stares chase a clinked rainbow flaunts with ... creation.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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