The Breakwater


Large boulders piled high
stretch out into the bay
and form a breakwater 
that shields the beach 
from high waves 
and heavy swells rolling in
from southerly gales. 

I have stood there
at the end when the sea
was hurling its rage 
and all fury exploded
like bomb bursts of watery
shrapnel into the air. 
I have seen such power 
subside and tamed
to compliant licks 
around the feet of rocks.

More than forty years ago
on a deep breath
I snorkeled down its ledges
into the rock strewn and weedy
world that lay at its base,
places where stingrays slept 
and where fish glided
effortlessly along crevices 
and over sponge
covered outcrops.
I cradled a fragile seahorse 
in my trembling hands.

I no longer have
the confidence to rock hop
its length to the end
but stand where it butts
the land, commanding memory
to whip up a wind
and set wave upon wave
to awaken a soul 
from its sleep
and make it feel
the sting of a southerly gale,
wet, cold and wonderful,
once again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Ah! What wonderful memories your writing evokes, Paul. Your memories are as vivid as if you experienced them yesterday. Bravo! :) Forget Mi-Nott
Willason Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 3:58 PM
Thankfully my memory still works...it is a great storehouse to raid when in need of inspiration. Many thanks for reading the poem and offering your kind words dear Gershon.
M  Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Paul l wish l had your ability of being able of to take the reader on such wonderful journeys allowing us to see and feel it like we are there. I enjoy “our” hehe trips down memory lane especially your happy childhood memories! Love this poem my friend! Debx
Willason Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 3:56 PM
As often stated....you are a treasured guest on all of my little escapades into memory and into the world of my imagination. Thankyou for your kind and supportive comments dear Deb.
Lane Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:44 AM
You share so many of your wonderful memories with us, Paul. I look forward to reading all of them as a gift you offer fellow poets.
Willason Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 3:53 PM
So kind my dear Lin....at my age memories are the most profitable source of poetic material...I am just so glad that a few of them make interesting reading and attract such gracious comments...thankyou do much my friend.
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Wonderfully done Paul, we all have spots like that which whisper to us....and if we have gained any wisdom from the years we whisper back..."what was I thinking"
Willason Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Thanks John...always appreciate your wise and witty observations...a trea very much valued.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace