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The Break

I watch you bend and break, Giving me no room for escape. The words that hang in the air Are anything but good and fair. How did it ever come to this? We used to live in such splendid bliss. I don’t know which is worse; The silent treatment or a stream of curse. My heart can take it no longer; Always thought I’d only grow fonder. But now we are at a stale mate, And I see that mine will be a lonely fate. As I turn from you and leave, Heartache and pain cause me to grieve. In time hopefully the wounds will heal, Or maybe I’ll learn not to feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/20/2017 1:21:00 PM
Hello Jane. This is the second entry I read of yours, thus allow me to say you have wonderful talent for poetry. Poetry is all about heart and soul not to mention the emotive element. This entry has that. It is always sad when a love fades. This was a pleasure to read. Well done entirely and completely.
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Date: 4/24/2017 5:01:00 AM
Hi Lisa, I really appreciate your comments. Thank you for your time! So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 4/9/2017 9:14:00 AM
A very sad heartfelt write, Jane, hope nobody has to pass through such intense pain:(
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Date: 4/10/2017 5:35:00 AM
Unfortunately, it is only through the rain that we learn to appreciate the sun, is it not?

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