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The Boys

They crawl in a line along the esplanade between beachfront mansions and the bay's indifference, windows down, elbows out, hands tapping on doors in time to the doof doof base pulverizing air and eardrums inside their metal sanctums of pure testosterone. Throbbing engines ease them along the street, slow and deliberate as if to give pedestrians time to admire and take in such potency. An occasional pump on the pedal sends a roar rasping out of twin exhausts and stutters a squeal of tyres announcing to the locals and all gathered, the "boys" are here. Marooned in another era, they seem oblivious to the derision flung at them as they pass, misinterpreting a smirk for an approving smile, the shake of a head a gesture of wonder rather than a judgment on how silly they look. Their egos blaze like the sun reflected in polished chrome. When satisfied they've given onlookers their fill of metallic ****, they hang a left, plant their foot and in a wake of tyre smoke and deafening noise, rocket off back to their own private planet, time frozen somewhere in the exhaust filled clouds on the far side of their minds.

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Date: 5/4/2023 8:57:00 AM
Funny thing - on the first screen I can see you have written metallic porn. When I click into the poem it's asterisked out. There are quite a few 4 letter words it could be. Made me laugh as (hopefully) they aren't words you'd use in your poetry :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/4/2023 9:29:00 PM
Thanks for comments DD. Poem refers to the hotted up and modified cars that sometimes frequent the beach area and their distinctive owners. They give quite a display. I did use metallic porn to emphasise the addictive nature of their obsession with cars but it got asterisked out...although seemes harmless to me. Take care...
Date: 5/4/2023 8:08:00 AM
This makes me laugh and feel a bit exhilarated at the same time but only because at first I thought this was army tanks or bikers. If so I'd say I would be caught in the vibe of how great they feel. However, if it's those with added tailfin things on the back of bog standard cars, then I'm not sure whose boat that floats haha
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