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The Bombay Grocery

Shyam*, finds cat food at special rate near the door. Goes to check out to manager of the grocery store Doubting manager asks him to bring cat if he has one Shyam returns with his small cat to buy food anon. Next day Shyam comes with a bag in his hand And asks the manager to put his hand in the bag down to the end Manager puts his hand and shouts “Pooh, Doodie pure” Shyam says, “yes, sir, I want the toilet paper sure”
+++++++ March 23, 2014 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Rhyme Sixth Place Win Contest: Collaboration by Jared Pickett Collaboration of Ram Mehta and Shyam Mehta The poem is partly a fictional write. First Stanza is a real event but the second stanza is fictional. But I wanted to test my grandson's rhyming talent. So wrote the first stanza and asked him to write second stanza with fun and humor, of course with my suggestion that suppose he goes to buy toilet paper and the owner needs a proof. * Shyam is an Indian name. He is a 9th Grade student in Charlotte, NC.
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Deschler Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:16 PM
A fun write from you and your grandson. Well done to you both! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 2:06 AM
A lovely collab Dr ram and it is lovely to see your grandson following in your footsteps xx
Guzzi Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Congrad's on your collaboration winning. Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 12:35 PM
your grandson will overtake you soon.. such a fine collab!.. sweet congrats, dr. ram.. huggs
Walker  Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Nicely done... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Dr. Ram, enjoyed your collaboration with your grandson. You write well together. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations to both you Dr and your promising grandson Shyam. He's lucky to have an excellent teacher! // paul
Roberts Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 9:18 AM
this is great fun, well done .....Seren
Garg Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:32 AM
hehehe. its a wonderful write..enjoyed reading this.
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 4:50 PM
It put a smile on my face and a laugh in my breath. I enjoyed reading this rhyme tonight - Connie
Pettit Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 12:33 AM
I know you will teach your grandson how to write poetry very well, Dr. Ram.
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 8:08 PM
haha. Great little humorous story!!
Curtis Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Hahahhahahaahah
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 8:30 AM
- Fun to read ... well done, Dr. Ram. - - Thumbs up for your grandson's rhyming talent ! :) - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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