The Bombay Grocery

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Shyam*, finds cat food at special rate near the door. Goes to check out to manager of the grocery store Doubting manager asks him to bring cat if he has one Shyam returns with his small cat to buy food anon. Next day Shyam comes with a bag in his hand And asks the manager to put his hand in the bag down to the end Manager puts his hand and shouts “Pooh, Doodie pure” Shyam says, “yes, sir, I want the toilet paper sure”
+++++++ March 23, 2014 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Rhyme Sixth Place Win Contest: Collaboration by Jared Pickett Collaboration of Ram Mehta and Shyam Mehta The poem is partly a fictional write. First Stanza is a real event but the second stanza is fictional. But I wanted to test my grandson's rhyming talent. So wrote the first stanza and asked him to write second stanza with fun and humor, of course with my suggestion that suppose he goes to buy toilet paper and the owner needs a proof. * Shyam is an Indian name. He is a 9th Grade student in Charlotte, NC.

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Date: 4/16/2014 1:16:00 PM
A fun write from you and your grandson. Well done to you both! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:06:00 AM
A lovely collab Dr ram and it is lovely to see your grandson following in your footsteps xx
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Date: 4/15/2014 4:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your collaboration winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:35:00 PM
your grandson will overtake you soon.. such a fine collab!.. sweet congrats, dr. ram.. huggs
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:45:00 AM
Nicely done... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena
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Date: 4/15/2014 10:39:00 AM
Dr. Ram, enjoyed your collaboration with your grandson. You write well together. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations to both you Dr and your promising grandson Shyam. He's lucky to have an excellent teacher! // paul
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:18:00 AM
this is great fun, well done .....Seren
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:32:00 AM
hehehe. its a wonderful write..enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 3/26/2014 4:50:00 PM
It put a smile on my face and a laugh in my breath. I enjoyed reading this rhyme tonight - Connie
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Date: 3/24/2014 12:33:00 AM
I know you will teach your grandson how to write poetry very well, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 3/23/2014 8:08:00 PM
haha. Great little humorous story!!
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:19:00 AM
Hahahhahahaahah
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Date: 3/23/2014 8:30:00 AM
- Fun to read ... well done, Dr. Ram. - - Thumbs up for your grandson's rhyming talent ! :) - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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