The Boatmans Song 1/ Many

1/ To be continued in many parts

It was a different era and it’s a different story
Of a boatman and his enchanting melodies 
An Apsara* falling in love with that boatman 
But the boatman having a different love story  

The boatman used to carry simple villagers 
From one bank of the river, to its other bank everyday
While moving his boat on the river  
He used to sing those heart touching stories 

His voice in itself was a melody 
Bestowed on him by the Goddess Saraswati*
And his love songs were the songs of true love stories
Sung by the boatman, in full throated ease and beauty
While oaring his boat in the river side stream
Flowing between a Jungle, on one bank side of the river
And long sand dunes spreading  
All over the other non ending side of the river Ganges

Charmed by boatman’s voice and songs
And charmed by the beauty of the enchanting Jungles* 
Spread all along the one side bank of the calmly flowing river Ganges
His passengers used to get lost in the melodies of his songs
So long as his boat was moving from the sand bank of the river stream 
To its Jungle end every time the boatman carries some passengers

One day the echoes of his melodies crossed 
The airy levels of earth and started flowing
Like a soothing cool breeze, even in heaven
And charmed all the heavenly bodies in the court of Indra*
He listened them almost spellbound and became enchanted 
By the echoes of those unheard melodies of the boatman

Urveshi* who was a crown beauty among the Apsaras* of Indra* 
And was much more than, beautiful and charming
Among all the Apsaras of heaven, found her lost in hearing
The echoes of those love songs sung by the boatman 

Urvasi found one day after hearing those echoes 
That she was in love with them and became restless 
To hear the real songs of the boatman, while sitting before him
In his boat in the river Ganges on earth 

Urveshi asked the Lord of Heaven Indra*
If she can go to earth to hear the songs of the boatman
As the echoes of his songs had made her restless beyond imagination
She found that even she can not enjoy the heavenly pleasures
Till she quenches her thirst of listening the melodies 
Of that boatman, he was singing on earth


Ravindra
	
Kanpur India 4th January 2010

* Apsara=   A Nymph dancer of heaven in the court of Indra as per Hindu Mythology 
* Indra=   The Lord of Heaven as per Hindu mythology
* Urveshi=   One of the most beautiful Apsaras (nymph) of Indra 
* Saraswati = Goddess of knowledge, music & arts as per Hindu mythology
* Jungle =  Forest
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March 10, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Good morning, RAVINDRA;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 6:07 PM
I have started reading. The beginning is good and so should be the end. If more images are there, it might have helped more to its meaning
La France Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Absolutely outstanding and wonderful.. I was swept away with the melody.. and tomorrow, dear heart, I will read number 2, I want this to last for it is a thing of beauty you have penned for us...
Mason Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Don't know if I will read all of these Ravindra for you have surely written a book ... LOL ... but you are a very talented writer and I look forward to reading more. Thank you for your recent comments and asking that I check on these and Flow River Flow ... I like invitations ... smile ... there are soooooo many writers on the Soup its hard to keep up with everyone ... smile ...
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January 17, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Ravindra, I really enjoyed this poem. It has a mystical, magical appeal. It flows smoothly as the musical tones of the boatman that soared to the heavens. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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January 17, 2010 at 8:05 AM
I joy to be in another culture! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Be blessed of heaven Ravindra, this is a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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January 12, 2010 at 8:28 AM
There is so much to learn from this about the Hindu beliefs, Ravinda. I'm glad I have started here at the beginning to see the onset of this love story. Foreign cultures have always been a source of intrigue and you are introducing us to the Hindus with a beautiful story that has incredible depth and imagery. Souper Daver Austin wrote a 60+ page poem that he shared with me and I do love this style of writing. Excellent concept and writing! Love, Carolyn
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January 10, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Beautiful....I am moving to part 2 now. Also, thank you for the clarification of the characters in the story. Sincerely, lainie
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January 7, 2010 at 7:44 AM
So beautiful Ravindra,Line by line I'm captivated by your poetic sentiments and story line,words. I'm off to read next one!! Your explanation of certain words helps a lot too, thanks. Your talent is beaming.Love Light Patty
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January 5, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Ravindra. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 4, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Ravindra.. how impressive... wonderful story with your references quite helpful... was wondering where u have been.. tried to look u up but did not remember the K. in your name as a middle initial so the site could not locate u yesterday... u should enter this first part in the new contest Flow River Flow by Brian Strand.. it has possibilities.. anxiously awaiting the next part... may your new year be filled with blessings... luv.. creativeness.. friendship.. health.. Linda-Marie..
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January 4, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Interesting poetic story that you have told here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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