The Blue Sky

In the blue sky clouds They are passing by slowly Looks like ice melting

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Date: 11/8/2018 11:50:00 AM

Well observed image. Love the lines. Thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/8/2019 1:48:00 PM

Hello Ibohal Kshetrimavum, thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Date: 6/6/2018 5:44:00 PM

That is a very lovely image for them. Soupmail for you on "eating what we like" haha

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2018 2:16:00 PM

Hello Andreathank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Date: 6/6/2018 3:45:00 PM

A genuine capture of image wrapped in a well crafted haiku! Thank you for sharing Darlene. Stay blessed.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2018 5:39:00 PM

Hello Besma, Thank you for the lovely comment.I lkie toshare with you. Have anice day my friend.

Date: 6/5/2018 3:58:00 PM

This is a great Haiku. I love your description :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2018 9:03:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I hope all is well with you. Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Date: 6/5/2018 2:11:00 PM

Indeed they do Darlene .

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2018 9:07:00 AM

Hello Tom, this how i see the white clouds in the blue sky.Hope all is well with you. have a nice day my friend.