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The Blue Dancers, Edgar Degas

write to me in wanderlust waves
of wakeful worship,
weave me a wish
with moon pearls and promises 
as I bloom attached
to your aesthetic accent ~
amidst the soul’s pulse,
still questioning ~ quivering,
in need of a colorful
constellation of consolation
to erase the
fickleness of fading flames…

I know, love searches
for your name, breathing
into the warmth of my want,
like verses coursing through
the veins of irreversible ink,
and if, to feel you closer,
I must compose you a cosmos,
let me seize teardrop crystals
of champagne chandeliers
and light up your dusk
with deafening desire ~
recklessly awaiting the surrender
of your sky to my silhouette…

but what would soothsayers
know of the circumference
of a romance immeasurable,
unstudied and unknown
to fortune whisperers
forsaking fortitude and faith ~
yet preaching dissolution
and dissociation,
as if eagle-feathered ego feasts
on the nest that has no place
for the gossamer greed 
of maggots,
manifesting mere moments
calculated through concave curves…

watch me waltz away from
the wickedness of bruised bluebirds
thirsting through cheap thrills,
seeking sunlight
beyond the barks of bravery ~
their tiny toes
perched in absolute desperation…

you are mine ~
O herald of hypnotic horizons,
wearing my poetry
perfumed with painless purity…
with you
the handles of heaven are nearer,
as the pilgrimage of you and I
is a visceral vision
of an unapologetic ambience ~
that no twisted tongue can tweak,
nor moulded monologue
can ever distort ~
the truth of tattooed fealty ~

a love letter left in the
            arms of timeless flow…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Lane Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:50 AM
I always marvel at your use of Alliteration, Ink. Many overuse it, and though you seem to... you do not simply put up words beginning with the same letter... NO, your remarkable vocabulary only writes those that make perfect sense. Bravo, dear friend for your talent.
Rodgers Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 7:29 AM
Dear Empress, Your words sweep in like a sudden tide, pulling the breath right out of my room. You don't just speak of affection; you construct a sprawling, breathing galaxy from the raw materials of devotion and defiance. When you write of seizing teardrop crystals from champagne chandeliers to light up the dusk, No doubt that this connection is forged in fire and stardust, far beyond the reach of fickle shadows. What visceral, tattooed fealty, Faved love letter safely anchored in the arms of time. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:48 AM
Me again LOL run out of characters wanted to say a fav for me fir sure <3 <3 hugzzzz unicorn sparkles loving mermaid wishes zooming around cosmos with you :))
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:43 AM
Awwwwww dearest ink a sheer work of art here . Took my breath away reading deep romance ;) " I know , love searches for your name , breathing into the warm of my want " omg smoking hott i need ice cubes lol but no can do need freezer mine broke. So cold shower ~ it is LOLLOL nae emojis yet :( ;) ... i wasn't on yesterday was at my sisters fir weekend Sunday morning getting in there car smashed my head on door. Still hurts n dizzy got concusion.i adore painting too your a sheer genius hugs <3
Buhagiar Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 11:48 AM
Great romance. I used to dance a lot. A beautiful painting with movement in it.
Bordner Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Dancers of periwinkle love victory performance, One in numbing ache, and One in humble despair, and the other in deft denial, the defeated in perimeter of the Victress, virtuous elegance, She has risen to receive what has been won, the adoration of a heart who's devotion has begun...J.A.B.
DiMino Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 10:47 AM
"I know, love searches for your name, breathing into the warmth of my want," -- Beautiful, honest and very romantic. "and if, to feel you closer, I must compose you a cosmos, let me seize teardrop crystals of champagne chandeliers and light up your dusk with deafening desire ~ " -- Wow! Sizzling. Very eloquent poetry throughout. I see a pure, direct honesty in all your works. Very brave and powerful.
Sharma  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 11:35 PM
"the truth of tattooed fealty ~ a love letter left in the arms of timeless flow…" gosh! Insanely breathtaking! Love the fluidity of your enchanting phraseology, you really do these ekphrasis poems the best, so inspiring as well ~ and I adored reading this, truly creative and alluring.. sending you moonbeams and magic always ~
Sharma  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 11:31 PM
Oh this is so so so beautiful! A love so sincere ~ shimmering above candlelit rhythms and with the moon pearls! That left me melted.. gosh.. and I absolutely cherish that line "let me seize teardrop crystals of champagne chandeliers and light up your dusk with deafening desire ~" wow.. your words there have such a charming, charismatic and ethereal quality there.. the imagery is sublime, dear Ink.. and how you've written about those bruised bluebirds just left me sighing! Very heartfelt and evocative.. "wearing my poetry perfumed with painless purity…" wow! And those ending words ..
Hind Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:47 PM
lovely! you do great on art works, I love "the handles of heaven are nearer," <3 :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:11 PM
Hello Ink :-) So nice romantic poem! Have a wonderful weekend! Best wishes!
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:37 PM
All I can say is beautiful - your eloquent words empower this art.
Kerr Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 2:19 PM
Ink Enpress, I am completely in awe of your atmospheric artistry and stunning mastery of the english language in general. You have through your talent painted the perfect picture in words. Such edifying colours to absorb. Light and care, Howard
Onpaper Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 12:44 PM
weave me a wish with moon pearls and promises as I bloom attached to your aesthetic accent .. ooo yesss!!! I’ll make a call I give u little gems of my accenttttt aeee!!! let me seize teardrop crystals of champagne chandeliers.. yess yess gimme a min to cry aee!! I shower u in my tears!!!watch me waltz away from the wickedness of bruised bluebirds.. oyee where you goin!!!!? ok lemme grab the popcorn to enjoy the few for a min before I throw a hissy fit over u leaving me!!! wearing my poetry perfumed with painless purity… even if painful I’ll wear aee.. I’ll take painkillers .. no problem! love letter left in the arms of timeless flow… mmmm that ending is sexaaaau papi!!
Empress Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 12:47 PM
Hahaha!!’ Lolol ughhhh rolling ~
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