The Blue Angel

"I heard an angel speak last night and he said 'write'"   Elizabeth Barrett Browning

T here was a cemetery across from the street where I lived when I was young.
H ot summer days could find us there strolling down its winding shady pathways,
E ven racing bikes or playing Hide ’n Seek among  trees and ornate granite stones.

B eyond the wide middle part of that graveyard, way in the very back,
L ay a secluded area set apart for the deceased of a prestigious family.
U ltimately my siblings and I ended up at the mausoleum in the center of that spot.  
E ager to view its main attraction, we would stand on tiptoes before its window. . . . 

A ll kinds of angels were scattered throughout that cemetery's sprawling lawn, but
N ot one outdid the angel appearing violet blue through that stained glass window.
G uarding the tomb of a small child, she knelt gracefully, her true hue pure white.
E ventually after years of showing her to friends, I left home forever; on my mind
L ingers this memory; on tiptoes, I'm marveling, face pressed against blue glass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Yvonne Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Excellent!
Davis Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Andrea This is such a wonderfully written and creative write. I like the story and how the first letters spell out the poems title. Thank you for the nice comment on my Ran My Heart Over poem. Hugs
Horsman Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 2:56 PM
these grave yards as we call them, use to fascinate us kids, when young, this brings back a lot of memories, love the poem, so well written...
Hunt Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 12:16 AM
Very beautiful. I find cemeteries to be both haunting and beautiful at the same time.
Susan Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Congratulations on your win! I knew it would be a winner!
J Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Very, very nice write. Perfect line for each letter.
Steele Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 6:45 AM
Very nice. Congratulations.
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )
Poet Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win with this beautiful Acrostic.Liked it:)
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Angels" contest Andrea. Love, Carol P.S. So wonderful to see you at the top of the list.
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:22 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Andrea
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Oh such a terrific read wonderful memory of childhood Andrea I really enjoyed it.Congrats on your well deserved 3rd.place and thanks for mine.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
K. Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Super yay for you for this beauty, Andrea :) Really enjoyed this one :) hugs to you :) and continue enjoying Monday :D
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 5:22 AM
whoooot, another feather on your cap, andie... congrats with huggs on your divine win! :) huggs
Ehrhardt Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:41 PM
This touched me. I was there with you. thank you.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in the contest with this stunning entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..
La France Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Dailey Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Modern cemetaries just don't have the mystery and interest as to the old graveyards with their statues and mausoleums. Good luck in the contest. Mike
Kapoor Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 12:48 PM
What a beautiful sketch of a scene from a cemetery my friend. You have made the scene and colors so beautiful that it would be difficult leave such a place without taking it's beauties in your memories. Outstandingly beautiful. Hope you are keeping fine. Sorry I am not regular on PS still, but hope to be more on PS soon. My good wishes for this beautiful entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..A.Dietrich
Benson Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 12:27 PM
I like the structure of this poem, The Blue Angel. Well done Andrea.
Babcock Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Oh a place I do not like to go. What a fantastic job you did on this write Andrea. love phyl
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 2:02 AM
Oops, Sorry, Andrea. This is the one you rewrote. It was the use of the acrostic form that threw me off. Well done! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn (You posted a poem with no name so we can't view it.)
Anish Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 11:09 AM
I like the acrostic form and admire what you have done with it. I hope you win the contest! My poetry teacher - Anna Rabinowitz wrote an acrostic which takes up a full book. It is called "Darkling". Your poem reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe's work. Love and Peace Matthew Anish
Sweetheart Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 8:26 AM
o wow goosebumps reading this lovely entry Andrea.. good luck my friend.. so sweet as Yasmin says below.. an awesome write just liek the writer who penned it..luv..
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 11:33 PM
oh my stars, andie... a real sense of the "beauty" of a moment... great art words ... you blue (blew) me away! winning's best with huggs! :) nette
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