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The blue

The suffocating structure of the water Engulfing my lungs, My body,my bones. Shivering with my skin, I feel as if I'm not alone. I can hear the waters strong winds growling in my ears, A roaring sound Pounding in my head Yet so quiet... So quiet, your listening Your breathing... My opposite...Air. Im water, my body flows My lungs have disappeared,... expired. Frisson, one last gasp.

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Date: 2/1/2025 3:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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