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The Blowhole Bully

Whale watching! Come on, let's go
   There's no time to be a landlubber
Grab your oars and get ready to row
   We're not after one for its blubber
Stay away from that blowhole bully
   who likes to scream and preach
There she is now, a big fat tubber
   She's blowing off, out of control
Yelling at another one on the beach 
   My goodness,  she likes to scold!

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Mike Gentile August 15, 2017 at 12:18 PM Lin, I've never seen a whale in person but I can imagine. This was fun and made me want to give it a shot, fun! Lin Lane August 15, 2017 at 12:24 PM lol Mike. That's some beastly looking creature in the cartoon. Whale hunting is fun and I hope you do try it. Thanks for reading and commenting on this one.

Lewis Raynes August 15, 2017 at 8:05 AM I bet there r some like this, good poem. Cheets Lin Lane August 15, 2017 at 8:08 AM Without a doubt, Lewis. Thanks for the comments.

Klio Tsitsikroni August 15, 2017 at 5:14 AM Haha, Nice one Lin. Lin Lane August 15, 2017 at 5:19 AM Thanks a bunch, Klio ;-)

Russell Sivey August 15, 2017 at 5:06 AM Ha ha! You have written a funny write here my friend! What an awesome and amazing poem, this is such a delight to read! Great Work!! Lin Lane August 15, 2017 at 5:11 AM I am so glad you laughed at this one. Thank you, Russell.

Dale Gregory Cozart August 14, 2017 at 7:24 PM I am definitely NOT going whale watching! Lin Lane August 14, 2017 at 7:30 PM Spoil sport. Stay on the beach and listen to the bully whale. Lol

Seren Roberts August 14, 2017 at 5:55 PM lol i stay well clear of all blow hole bullies...nice one Lin....Seren Lin Lane August 14, 2017 at 7:27 PM Hey Seren. Thanks for reading this.

Heidi Sands August 14, 2017 at 4:13 PM LOL I am laughing at this one Lin. Thank you for the laugh today! Great one :) Lin Lane August 14, 2017 at 4:43 PM I'm happy that I've made you laugh. Thanks very much, Heidi.