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The Blowhole Bully

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Whale watching! Come on, let's go There's no time to be a landlubber Grab your oars and get ready to row We're not after one for its blubber Stay away from that blowhole bully who likes to scream and preach There she is now, a big fat tubber She's blowing off, out of control Yelling at another one on the beach My goodness, she likes to scold!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/15/2017 12:18:00 PM
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Lin, I've never seen a whale in person but I can imagine. This was fun and made me want to give it a shot, fun!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/15/2017 12:24:00 PM
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lol Mike. That's some beastly looking creature in the cartoon. Whale hunting is fun and I hope you do try it. Thanks for reading and commenting on this one.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 8/15/2017 8:05:00 AM
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I bet there r some like this, good poem. Cheets
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/15/2017 8:08:00 AM
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Without a doubt, Lewis. Thanks for the comments.
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Klio Tsitsikroni
Date: 8/15/2017 5:14:00 AM
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Haha, Nice one Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/15/2017 5:19:00 AM
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Thanks a bunch, Klio ;-)
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Russell Sivey
Date: 8/15/2017 5:06:00 AM
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Ha ha! You have written a funny write here my friend! What an awesome and amazing poem, this is such a delight to read! Great Work!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/15/2017 5:11:00 AM
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I am so glad you laughed at this one. Thank you, Russell.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/14/2017 7:24:00 PM
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I am definitely NOT going whale watching!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/14/2017 7:30:00 PM
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Spoil sport. Stay on the beach and listen to the bully whale. Lol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/14/2017 5:55:00 PM
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lol i stay well clear of all blow hole bullies...nice one Lin....Seren
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/14/2017 7:27:00 PM
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Hey Seren. Thanks for reading this.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 4:13:00 PM
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LOL I am laughing at this one Lin. Thank you for the laugh today! Great one :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/14/2017 4:43:00 PM
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I'm happy that I've made you laugh. Thanks very much, Heidi.

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