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The Blowhole Bully

Whale watching! Come on, let's go
   There's no time to be a landlubber
Grab your oars and get ready to row
   We're not after one for its blubber
Stay away from that blowhole bully
   who likes to scream and preach
There she is now, a big fat tubber
   She's blowing off, out of control
Yelling at another one on the beach 
   My goodness,  she likes to scold!

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Mike Gentile Date: 8/15/2017 12:18:00 PM Lin, I've never seen a whale in person but I can imagine. This was fun and made me want to give it a shot, fun! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/15/2017 12:24:00 PM lol Mike. That's some beastly looking creature in the cartoon. Whale hunting is fun and I hope you do try it. Thanks for reading and commenting on this one.

Lewis Raynes Date: 8/15/2017 8:05:00 AM I bet there r some like this, good poem. Cheets Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/15/2017 8:08:00 AM Without a doubt, Lewis. Thanks for the comments.

Klio Tsitsikroni Date: 8/15/2017 5:14:00 AM Haha, Nice one Lin. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/15/2017 5:19:00 AM Thanks a bunch, Klio ;-)

Russell Sivey Date: 8/15/2017 5:06:00 AM Ha ha! You have written a funny write here my friend! What an awesome and amazing poem, this is such a delight to read! Great Work!! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/15/2017 5:11:00 AM I am so glad you laughed at this one. Thank you, Russell.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 8/14/2017 7:24:00 PM I am definitely NOT going whale watching! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/14/2017 7:30:00 PM Spoil sport. Stay on the beach and listen to the bully whale. Lol

Seren Roberts Date: 8/14/2017 5:55:00 PM lol i stay well clear of all blow hole bullies...nice one Lin....Seren Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/14/2017 7:27:00 PM Hey Seren. Thanks for reading this.

Heidi Sands Date: 8/14/2017 4:13:00 PM LOL I am laughing at this one Lin. Thank you for the laugh today! Great one :) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/14/2017 4:43:00 PM I'm happy that I've made you laugh. Thanks very much, Heidi.