The Blind Stag - POTD

Sunrise, sunset, noon.
It meant little to him.
He was completely blind.

Snow fell all around
Hiding the little fodder
That lay around.

The wind blew,
Yet it conveyed no scent.
His antlers were frost bitten.
His body starved of food.

He sensed a rangale of does
With the head stag alert.
The fight would be lost.
In his blindness he had no chance.
So he turned back despite the snow.

Hunters came with arrows.
The blind stag searched for under bush.
He knew his prayers were in vain.
The arrows were precise.

The blind stag fell, no sound.
It was a relief.
The snow continued to fall, staining
The ice with blood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:53 PM
Sensitive one. Belated Congratulations on the potd
Messina Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:17 AM
And just like that, here one day, gone the next. But I liked that in the end, finally, it was relief. Great write, Victor. Oh, And belated Congratulations on POTD. Hope you are well. -CM
Sharma Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 2:09 AM
melancholy, but congratulations for POTD
Bayles Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Wonderful, Victor. Congratulations on POTD.
Jones Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Belated congratulations on potd!
George Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Hi Victor, returning to your poem with Congratulations on Your POTD honor.
Nicole Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 7:26 PM
So sad. To be blind is a difficult life, even for an animal, but to die in this way, is heartbreaking. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. Congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you, Victor. Hugs, Brandy
Freie Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Bloody good poem, tho I'm craving venison now. Thanks dude, I was starving! Dang, no venison in the house, looks like hamburger helper again!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. Hooray!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Blind Stag" write/story again. Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
Grubb Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:02 AM
Bleak, powerful, and quietly devastating. That ending hits hard. Well done, Victor. Congrats on POTD.
Hind Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 9:29 AM
Congrats on POTD!!
Rodgers Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Hello Victor, Congrats on POTD. I truly admire how you captured the spirit of perseverance even when hope seems distant, and I felt a deep empathy for your solitary figure. Your words turn hardship into something almost tender. It truly brings genuine comfort and warmth, even through the snow and death. Autumn Blessings, Victor, Daniel
Brul Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 7:32 AM
This is such a gem! Congratulations on your POTD. Stay creative ^____^ JCB
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem is heartwrenching. Your poems are always wonderful.
Lawless Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Beautifully done Victor, a well told poetically poignant tale. For nature shouts it beauty while quietly holds its sadness....
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 5:35 AM
returning to congratulate you, Victor, on your POTD designation. Well deserved for this sad, poignant, and memorable poem.
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Quite a sad verse Victor, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Ooh…you so deserves this honor! Congrats on POTD!
Kitchin Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Victor, a great sad and captivating poem, congratulations on POTD.
Seeker Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Depressing. Well penned though. Congratulations on POTD, Victor
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 2:23 AM
- A sad "story", Viktor - Written with a skillful pen :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
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October 3, 2025 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations Victor on having received poem of the day for this well written sad moving poetry… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 6:09 PM
We are witnesses to his demise. So well written, as if we were actually there.
Sharma Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:20 AM
Heart wrenching .
George Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 12:35 AM
So sad! You have described the tragic fate of the stag in such a moving way, that it haunts me. Imagine the plight of those who can't see!
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