The Blind Date Itty Bitty

She dressed and make up for a party,
A handsome guy is about to meet.
Can't hide the excitement and thrill.
She will no longer stay virgin.
After living "no boyfriend since birth."
The heaven answered all her prayers.
When shake his hand to make impressed.
She smile 'til ears, then false teeth slipped!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bordner Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 12:16 AM
The date goes on. J.A.B.
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:20 AM
lol... it's a blind date.. that goes on of course.. Thank you ,J.A.B!!
Horne Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 3:50 PM
LOL, had a good laugh at the surprise ending : )
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Jack.. Glad that you enjoyed it!! :O))
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Good morning AiyaH.
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Hi Rick.. gOOd morNing!!! :O))
Callus Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 8:40 AM
I'm afraid this lady waited far too long....false teeth....legs....arms....??! no wonder it's a BLIND date too. // enjoyed to the full. gl in contest :) // paul
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Hey Paul.. thanks a lot nice guy!! ^__^
Smith Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 7:14 PM
What a fun little ditty :-) :-)
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Hey Tim.. Thank you ,dear friend!! =D
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Not what I expected but most entertaining!
Torres Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 3:31 AM
we wouldn't know what will happen next.. lol.. Thanks a lot! ;)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 5:05 PM
:) LMAO!!! what an impression.. :D ++warm hellos from here olive eloisa God bless..
Torres Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 2:51 AM
Thanks Olive... You're so pretty on your new avatar... grrr!! lol... :O))
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:54 PM
.................... S - M - I - L - E ......................... (First place !!!) ......................L - O - V - E - I - T- !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Have a lovely weekend with your beautiful princesses, dear friend AiyaH :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:21 PM
:( ..anyways... I already add you in my eternal acct. in my heart.. Love you always!! <3 ,<3 <3 ^__^
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:09 PM
- I do not have F.B. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Enjoy!! <3 <3 <3
Torres Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:05 PM
do you have fb acct, Anne?... :O)) Linda and I were friends now in fb.. I hope we can be, too.
Torres Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:04 PM
Oh my G..!!!! You surprised me with this beautiful comment , my dear friend Anne Lise!!!! ...this is so cute!! ..(you know what?_ I'm having a hard time trying to copy this style... but it's only you can do it!! lol... ) Happy weekend to everyone of us!!! :o)) ..I'm gonna have 2 days off w/ my family... not actually to have a rest but to be their all time nanny, cook, and playmate... plus a mountain high laundry... BUT its OK!!! ..that's my happiness... hehe.... ^_^
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Hilarious! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan - I've been writing about 'purity' too do drop by and see my collaboration poem Bronte Inspiration. Hug Jan
Torres Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Jan... you're so kind dear!!! Good luck to you, too. :o))
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