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The Blind Date Itty Bitty

She dressed and make up for a party,
A handsome guy is about to meet.
Can't hide the excitement and thrill.
She will no longer stay virgin.
After living "no boyfriend since birth."
The heaven answered all her prayers.
When shake his hand to make impressed.
She smile 'til ears, then false teeth slipped!

Copyright © Aiyah Torres | Year Posted 2014

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Justin Bordner Date: 4/13/2014 12:16:00 AM The date goes on. J.A.B. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 8:20:00 AM lol... it's a blind date.. that goes on of course.. Thank you ,J.A.B!!

Jack Horne Date: 4/12/2014 3:50:00 PM LOL, had a good laugh at the surprise ending : ) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 8:17:00 AM Thank you, Jack.. Glad that you enjoyed it!! :O))

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/12/2014 9:33:00 AM Good morning AiyaH. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 8:16:00 AM Hi Rick.. gOOd morNing!!! :O))

Paul Callus Date: 4/12/2014 8:40:00 AM I'm afraid this lady waited far too long....false teeth....legs....arms....??! no wonder it's a BLIND date too. // enjoyed to the full. gl in contest :) // paul Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 8:14:00 AM Hey Paul.. thanks a lot nice guy!! ^__^

Tim Smith Date: 4/11/2014 7:14:00 PM What a fun little ditty :-) :-) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/14/2014 8:13:00 AM Hey Tim.. Thank you ,dear friend!! =D

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/11/2014 5:58:00 PM Not what I expected but most entertaining! Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/13/2014 3:31:00 AM we wouldn't know what will happen next.. lol.. Thanks a lot! ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/11/2014 5:05:00 PM :) LMAO!!! what an impression.. :D ++warm hellos from here olive eloisa God bless.. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/13/2014 2:51:00 AM Thanks Olive... You're so pretty on your new avatar... grrr!! lol... :O))

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2014 1:54:00 PM .................... S - M - I - L - E ......................... (First place !!!) ......................L - O - V - E - I - T- !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Have a lovely weekend with your beautiful princesses, dear friend AiyaH :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/11/2014 2:21:00 PM :( ..anyways... I already add you in my eternal acct. in my heart.. Love you always!! <3 ,<3 <3 ^__^ Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2014 2:09:00 PM - I do not have F.B. :) Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2014 2:07:00 PM Enjoy!! <3 <3 <3 Aiyah Torres Date: 4/11/2014 2:05:00 PM do you have fb acct, Anne?... :O)) Linda and I were friends now in fb.. I hope we can be, too. Aiyah Torres Date: 4/11/2014 2:04:00 PM Oh my G..!!!! You surprised me with this beautiful comment , my dear friend Anne Lise!!!! ...this is so cute!! ..(you know what?_ I'm having a hard time trying to copy this style... but it's only you can do it!! lol... ) Happy weekend to everyone of us!!! :o)) ..I'm gonna have 2 days off w/ my family... not actually to have a rest but to be their all time nanny, cook, and playmate... plus a mountain high laundry... BUT its OK!!! ..that's my happiness... hehe.... ^_^

Jan Allison Date: 4/11/2014 1:43:00 PM Hilarious! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan - I've been writing about 'purity' too do drop by and see my collaboration poem Bronte Inspiration. Hug Jan Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 4/11/2014 1:45:00 PM Thank you, Jan... you're so kind dear!!! Good luck to you, too. :o))