The Blessing

When I held the rose of you 
Sweetest lavender began flooding through the veins 

Melting into the soul's echo lovingly wrapped up 
in cotton softness beholding treasures find 

Sparkling diamond light shines silver lining footprints
with the dewdrops amazing gems crown perfection 
 
Under a halo upon the mantel there grace sits 
So beautiful and rare as the morning smiles 

With colours drawn inwardly a special promise arches 
upon an angel whom appears though the breath held light 

Always and forever dressed as a dove purely angelic 
Swept away breathless beyond space
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:41 AM
love bubbles in the air !
Loughman Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:25 PM
“Always and forever dressed as a dove purely angelic...Swept away breathless beyond space”. Brilliant my friend-:) Congratulations on POTW! Well deserved and well done!
Bateman Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Congratulations on POTW with your latest poetic selection here. Most excellent and very well-deserved. Best Always, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow!I just found out! A very huge congratulations on POTW! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful romantic love poem! Very golden glowing pen!Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you. Enjoy it!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Rose  Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations Liam, excellent pen ,
La France Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Liam, a big congratulations on Poem of the Week with this dreamy, romantic love poem, well done !
Dillenbeck Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Much to enjoy here, but perhaps what I appreciate the most is how the last stanza could never have been LeftBrain predicted from the first, and yet, if this is a white rose, my RightBrain can almost see these two as mutually redundant events.
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:04 AM
many congrats on potw for this romantic gem liam:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:11 PM
- Beautiful and romantic, Liam :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:55 AM
This is so beautiful liam..excellent poem! Your words flow smoothly..quite rhythmic..feels like lyrics..well done!
Petersen Potter Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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