The Bleak Gray Mist

A bleak gray mist slowly descends
slays all the color in the land.
Of melancholy it portends.
The slow trickle of hourglass sand
shows seconds turn to endless days
each one a moment of self-doubt
and ever-deepening malaise;
as loathing builds its own redoubt.
The bleak gray mist will darker grow
each time it creeps up to attack;
it was, and will be always so
until there only will be black.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 8:27 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. In life somethings one cannot explain, depression is one of those things. Only when one lives it can one understand it. Have a wonderful/fun day............................
Miller Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 3:24 AM
Thank you Paula.
Ashley Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Dear Terry, your expressive imagery paints “the bleak gray mist” in emotive shades of melancholy.. indeed depression “slays all the color in the land”. A soulful beauty, the last line is especially poignant. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Miller Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 1:41 AM
Hi Susan, thank you for your kind comments, depression is so hard to explain to someone who has never suffered. I keep trying with my poems
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March 16, 2024 at 4:05 PM
Depression and its darkness so well described and written Terry! Relatable ….l really like this! Debx
Miller Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 1:40 AM
Hi Deb, thank you for stopping by and your kind comments, this is a theme I keep coming back to trying to express depression, this is the closest I have come
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