Eileen Manassian Poet Etheree

The Blazing Sun

You
And Me
Harmony
Love’s symphony
Blissful ecstasy 
A never ending song
That both of us sing along
Life’s battle are gallantly won
We merge our entities into one
A fusion outshining the blazing sun.

Eileen Manassian Ghali

PS...In an Etheree, each line is built around a syllable count starting from one syllable in line one, going to ten syllables in line ten. It has no meter and no rhyme, but I'm a rebel at heart..sue me! ;)

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Timothy Hicks April 22, 2013 at 11:18 PM I've done these before (though each time I write one they end up being a double etheree, which goes back down to one again). I liked that you didn't let the form dictate with what you wanted to say, but instead the form conformed with you... does that make any sense? but ANYway... great job anyhow! A poet invented these rules, so it's a poet that must break them as well :)

Richard D Seal April 21, 2013 at 3:54 PM But are you a rebel with a cause Auntie. oooo waits for lecture lol. You did great job wth it though. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:33 AM No lecture today....auntie is giving you the day off for good behavior! ;)

Poet Tacito April 21, 2013 at 2:00 PM I bow to the rebels at heart! No lawsuits here! Just respect. :) Excellently done! Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:38 AM My favorite t-shirt while I was growing up??? One that had the words TROUBLE MAKER on the front! That was me. :) Thanks for the lovely lovely post, Drake! It brings me lots of joy! :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 21, 2013 at 10:22 AM Eileen, Intensely passionate, nice !! Jag Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 9:44 PM Thanks, Jag. I'm glad you liked it! Love and passion...the key words in my life.

Richard Lamoureux April 21, 2013 at 8:10 AM I like it. Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 9:44 PM :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2013 at 2:43 AM - It is absolutely beautiful, Eileen!! <3 <3 <3 - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 9:44 PM <3 <3 <3....thanks, sweet Anne Lise!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 21, 2013 at 2:08 AM love a rebel, well done xx Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 9:46 PM SHEESH! Glad to KNOW that.... ;) Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 9:45 PM Glad to now that GOLDEN GIRL! :)