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The Blazing Sun

You And Me Harmony Love’s symphony Blissful ecstasy A never ending song That both of us sing along Life’s battle are gallantly won We merge our entities into one A fusion outshining the blazing sun. Eileen Manassian Ghali PS...In an Etheree, each line is built around a syllable count starting from one syllable in line one, going to ten syllables in line ten. It has no meter and no rhyme, but I'm a rebel at heart..sue me! ;)

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/22/2013 11:18:00 PM

I've done these before (though each time I write one they end up being a double etheree, which goes back down to one again). I liked that you didn't let the form dictate with what you wanted to say, but instead the form conformed with you... does that make any sense? but ANYway... great job anyhow! A poet invented these rules, so it's a poet that must break them as well :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/21/2013 3:54:00 PM

But are you a rebel with a cause Auntie. oooo waits for lecture lol. You did great job wth it though. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:33:00 AM

No lecture today....auntie is giving you the day off for good behavior! ;)

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/21/2013 2:00:00 PM

I bow to the rebels at heart! No lawsuits here! Just respect. :) Excellently done!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:38:00 AM

My favorite t-shirt while I was growing up??? One that had the words TROUBLE MAKER on the front! That was me. :) Thanks for the lovely lovely post, Drake! It brings me lots of joy! :)