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The Blating Fawn

Where is that blating? Looking all around Trying to find the source It sounds like a kid crying for its dam Nowhere in sight is the evidence of the sound Turn and look once more From the direction of the babbling creek Down where the Paper Birch stands Skirted in native Bamboo Where the coolness is so inviting To a weary soul Come sit, relax, enjoy the ions that refresh The sound gets much louder there__ Then in the exact spot looking There comes Rocky carrying a fawn The fawn with his polished cleft small ebony hooves Attached to his very long abnormal looking legs Legs that are swinging back and forth for Rocky had him in the nape of his neck This dappled child of the doe Calling for its mother to come To this day I can still hear his cry! BaMa....... (OUr Rat Terrier who is fourteen years old was diagnosed with an enlarged heart yesterday.. The vet say is treatable and he should live several years..Just a memory of when he was young.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/12/2011 4:14:00 PM
really loved reading this poem and thank you for your encouraging comment to me as a new poet im really excited to read more of your poems!
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Date: 3/12/2011 6:10:00 AM
Wonderful words in this piece Sara .. very expressive visuals and imagery is keen luv.. a fitting tribute to your sweet pet.. a condition that is very treatable so he should be fine.. send me his name.. there is a prayer website for poets where u can list his name and I will do that for u my friend...
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Date: 3/11/2011 8:50:00 PM
these kind of memories will always be a part of you,,I am so glad that your pet will be fine,,,Thank you for visiting my words and for leaving some of yours behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/11/2011 5:28:00 PM
Very nice poem. Jimmy
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Date: 3/11/2011 2:35:00 PM
It sounds like Rocky was trying to help the fawn find its mother. Exquisite images in this outstanding free verse, Sara. Rocky remains in my prayers. Blessings to you and your family, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:01:00 PM
What a beautiful poem and memory, Sara. I'm very glad your dog will be OK. Both of our dogs died from cancer long ago, but the memories are always there : ) Jack
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