The Blacksmith's Crucible

Dark I stand, cobalt cold and chipped ice 
to the touch. Like a jetty on a winter's day, 
mooring empty, friendless boats jostled 
by vexed waves; bullying the weak. 

But there was a time. I stood like Vesuvius, 
naked to your cause. And hungered 
for that momentary thrust of raw steel, 
releasing spumante detonations that

reached a soot filled sky. I resonated with 
the intensity of platinum-white heat, ready 
to shape your dreams. Before returning it
forged by my love and pliable to your hammer

Buckets of water would quenched your prize and 
sent screaming rivulets of steam off to find a 
haven from the heat. Then, standing proud,
admired our work, as an artist to his canvas

But, days passed into years and years into an age.
And from the corner of my empire, I watched 
the spring of your prime, turn to the clay filled 
winter of your day. Like the dimming of a lustrous pearl

And now your apron, hangs on its nail, 
gathering collections of a spiders yearly 
endeavours. Whilst motionless and resolute, 
I guard your kingdom and await your return. 
Ready to recommence the heat of battle once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/8/2015 10:45:00 AM
Imagery and powerful phrasing are the cornerstones of this superb piece in my view. '...spumante detonations,' '...cobalt cold...like a jetty on a winter's day,' '...screaming tendrils of steam,' '...like the dimming of a lustred pearl.' Excellent.
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/8/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Keith. Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 12/1/2015 11:38:00 AM
Stunning and wide. I love this poem. So much strength of conviction.
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/1/2015 12:03:00 PM
Thanks again. Looks like you're working your way through my ouvre
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