The Blackberry and the Rose

The wild blackberry villain
Fell in love with my sweet rose.
I found them in the garden
All entangled in love's throes.

I took a hoe and hit him hard
With all the strength I had.
How could my hybrid beauty be
Seduced by such a cad?

I only meant to whack him down,
The sun got in my eyes.
My darling little blossom met
An early sad demise.

Now my rose lies motionless,
Betrayed by her wanton way,
Deserted by her false lover
Who led her far astray.

I know that coward's hiding
Beneath the sheltering ground,
Hiding, plotting, planning, scheming
Another to take down.

Dear one turn away that fraud,
Don't believe his selfish boast.
He will take you to his level and
Then thrive on your compost.

It is true that we are known
By the company we keep.
Consorting with a villain
Brings a price that's mighty steep.




For "Old Contest Entry" contest. 
 I entered this in Syed Amaan Ahmad free contest. 
 Any form any theme.  I got only an h
but I thought it one of my best poems.  So I'll try again.
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August 8, 2016 at 10:44 PM
JOYCE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~
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May 16, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Finally found this on page 13!! A very fine write my friend! I am going to add it to it's sister in my fav.. Bravo on presenting such beauties!!
Brown Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2011 at 12:36 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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June 1, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Joyce!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
Horne Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 2:22 PM
So glad you placed much higher in PD's contest, Joyce. Many congrats : )
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joyce
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June 1, 2011 at 1:21 PM
a wonderful win Joyce for a wonderful entry in old poem contest..enjoy another victory my friend with luv..
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June 1, 2011 at 11:59 AM
congrats on your super win. cory
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Joyce. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 5:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase for them both luv..
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November 9, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with this great poem, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:13 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "Free Style". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joyce. Thanks for informaing me about the contest result
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 12:06 PM
Congrats Joyce on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all this holiday weekend... enjoy those new babies..luv..
K. Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 6:04 PM
poor rose, indeed! I really loved how this poem flowed, Joyce! And a wonderful lesson incorporated in it, too! :)
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 8:03 AM
I love the personalization....the evil forces of the berry vine! Well done, Joyce!!
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May 29, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Great use of a double meaning in this poem, Joyce. Although it is clear to see how the blackberry vine threatens the rose, there are many "vines" that threaten man's ability to flourish as well. Super Souper poetry here! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Wonderful personifications of blackberry and rose
Jordan Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Joyce, simply superb poetry. Breathtakingly beautiful, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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May 29, 2010 at 1:44 AM
A delight to read. Your second stanza is my favourite, really made me smile. Light hearted on one level, but perhaps a wise warning too. Great write :)
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