The Blackberry and the Rose

The wild blackberry villain
Fell in love with my sweet rose.
I found them in the garden
All entangled in love's throes.

I took a hoe and hit him hard
With all the strength I had.
How could my hybrid beauty be
Seduced by such a cad?

I only meant to whack him down,
The sun got in my eyes.
My darling little blossom met
An early sad demise.

Now my rose lies motionless,
Betrayed by her wanton way,
Deserted by her false lover
Who led her far astray.

I know that coward's hiding
Beneath the sheltering ground,
Hiding, plotting, planning, scheming
Another to take down.

Dear one turn away that fraud,
Don't believe his selfish boast.
He will take you to his level and
Then thrive on your compost.

It is true that we are known
By the company we keep.
Consorting with a villain
Brings a price that's mighty steep.




For "Old Contest Entry" contest. 
 I entered this in Syed Amaan Ahmad free contest. 
 Any form any theme.  I got only an h
but I thought it one of my best poems.  So I'll try again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/8/2016 10:44:00 PM
JOYCE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/16/2014 6:17:00 PM
Finally found this on page 13!! A very fine write my friend! I am going to add it to it's sister in my fav.. Bravo on presenting such beauties!!
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:36:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:47:00 PM
Joyce!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:22:00 PM
So glad you placed much higher in PD's contest, Joyce. Many congrats : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joyce
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:21:00 PM
a wonderful win Joyce for a wonderful entry in old poem contest..enjoy another victory my friend with luv..
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Date: 6/1/2011 11:59:00 AM
congrats on your super win. cory
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Joyce. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:00:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase for them both luv..
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:18:00 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with this great poem, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Syed Amaan Ahmad's contest "Free Style". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joyce. Thanks for informaing me about the contest result
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Date: 9/5/2010 12:06:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all this holiday weekend... enjoy those new babies..luv..
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:04:00 PM
poor rose, indeed! I really loved how this poem flowed, Joyce! And a wonderful lesson incorporated in it, too! :)
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Date: 5/29/2010 8:03:00 AM
I love the personalization....the evil forces of the berry vine! Well done, Joyce!!
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:51:00 AM
Great use of a double meaning in this poem, Joyce. Although it is clear to see how the blackberry vine threatens the rose, there are many "vines" that threaten man's ability to flourish as well. Super Souper poetry here! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2010 6:55:00 AM
Wonderful personifications of blackberry and rose
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:39:00 AM
Joyce, simply superb poetry. Breathtakingly beautiful, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/29/2010 1:44:00 AM
A delight to read. Your second stanza is my favourite, really made me smile. Light hearted on one level, but perhaps a wise warning too. Great write :)
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