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The Black Tide - Act 2

As i reach our town There has been news of the spread Homesteaders and livestock In suffocate dead Nothing has been spared The outskirts it has reached Townsfolk now in convoy Their livelihood's breached We hear on the radio This black tide is all around But it only comes from the rivers From moist and wetted grounds We reach the Rangers camp Where scientists are meeting To determine this phenomenon This ebony black string Many weeks pass As this menace gathers speed And its strong smell of oil Lingers on this weed A press conference has been called The lab reports are back Something deep below Has made organic compounds attack Has this been a freak of nature What else do we not know What else do we take for granted That around us steadily grows Many months have passed The black tide slowly creeps This phenomenon from below Its as if our planet weeps We have learnt to live in tandem As we control it best we can Maybe its always been here Ever since time began http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-9.php

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Date: 3/19/2010 3:59:00 AM
Reading your poetry this morning, James, has been a wonderful way to start the day. I found this poem very interesting...the dinosaurs are taking their toll on the living these days, I guess. Decomposed, turned to coal and oil...Hum. You've got me thinking about the eternal plan...cleansing the world with fire...Is it getting ready for the big match? Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/15/2010 6:40:00 AM
We have red tide around here sometimes but have not heard of black tide...I have often wondered what happens to space where the oil is being pulled from the ground????Does something else go in there like maybe rainwater???Great question raising write..Keep the creative pen flowing..SM..Sara
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:08:00 PM
Wow,.....I read the other comments James, and I believe it's this important of nature that man is depleting from our earth which you have me intrigued with....not saying I'm right, yet in poetic thoughts, this one, well both acts has impowered my thoughts Sir ! Awesome write Mr. Fraser ! james
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:02:00 PM
Kind of scary senario. I agree with Carolyn--"compelling" is an apt description of this poem. Good use of rhyme to share your thoughts. I left a comment on the awesome poem you wrote with Carolyn. Keep on writing!! Have a good week. Karen
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Date: 3/14/2010 2:29:00 PM
Compelling conclusion, James. Can't help but think "oil" is the black tide. We are always warned of the dangers of offshore drilling; could this be the consequence? Quite a way for Mother Nature to rebel! So glad you finished this one. You should be co-writing with Stephen King. Love, Carolyn
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