The Black Quandary

The black curls, oh the resemblance to the night

clings to her forehead, distraught,

like the spider's web shambled,

crooked,   rubbing the forehead like the harsh waters 

rubbing the grey stone, by the riverside.

Polishing it maybe, intriguing,

forlorn tales hit back, yet again

saying the clandestine, monotonous, words,

one by one, the whole nine yards.

Magic, Stealth, vigour, 

anonymous all the emotions,

wrapped in the grey blanket

to  the body to cover the bitter marks,

The black curls, congruence to the pain,

symmetrical to the thorns,

playing angles, all the way

Oh, these black curls falls the way

it did that day.

Conundrum, play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
White Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 2:05 AM
Hi Devika, a Concrete is a poem in the shape of what you are writing about :) Your Free Verse poem is wonderful, extremely expressive in imagery. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Mohan Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Devika, feelings packed poem. very nice one. I enjoyed it. congrats// madan mohan
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