The Black Force


The time-space continuum, 
containing God particles of wonder,
defined the nucleus of nascent creation
in the eternal niche of nothingness.

The collapsed stars of the cosmos,
the high gravity mass of celestial entity,
light can’t escape my event horizon,
encapsulates whatever I suck in.

My black force dilates time, 
makes it run slow, even stops its flow,
annihilates all cosmic information
within my singularity mystic core unique.

Things created with God particles,
at the end of life time prime,
the unassailable essence
gravitates soul to disappear in my hole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/5/2024 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my Science Fiction Poetry Contest. I found your poem to be a prediction of our galaxy's future. Recently I read that there is a black hole at the center of our galaxy that will eventually "eat us" in the distant future. Chetta
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/5/2024 7:25:00 PM
Many thanks for the placement, Chetta. Yes, after the big bang the big crunch is going to happen some day.
Date: 2/5/2024 12:22:00 PM
Well done, congratulations on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/5/2024 7:26:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and for your comment that I value so much.
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