The Birthplace of Tornadoes

Storms are brazen, often rude,
Lighting the sky with invectives
Of white-blue light terrible.

The rains carp the submissive
Ground wearing it so slowly
Down into curves, mud.

The thunder stomps through
Heaven’s empty rooms above.
It knows the children tremble

Beneath, conjuring punishments
Through tall silken crowns
Where venomous rodents erupt.

In boredom, the storm sulks
Away.  

In time, 
The rodents and children trade places.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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May 28, 2009 at 3:14 PM
I really like the simple, strong descriptive words mixed with your complex subject matter. Heaven having "empty rooms," a storm getting bored, and rodent and children trading places, these are somehow a delight to the imagination...and creatively resounding with intelligence and style.
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