The Birth of Music

The old man was no longer a hunter,
But he would not stoop to women’s chores.

A storm was brewing as he sought
Shelter in a round cave.
Soon he had a fire going but he preferred
To stay near the entrance and listen.
He did not know yet what music was
But he could tell the difference 
Between each sound that echoed outside.

The wind was strong that began like a rigadoon
But reached its forte in tone and pitch,
A crescendo that reached its apex as it climbed the hills.
There it hit stones and sent them down crashing 
Like the sound of synchronized drums.
Slowly the wind lost its force and vibrated into a cadence,
Leading to an herbaceous plain as it wandered off
Like a soft funeral march.

The old man heard all and knew what was to come.
Promptly a bird began to sing to the now calm night,
A mellifluous sonata and then subliminal silence.
A breeze whipped up, a silky serenade that like an arpeggio
It grew ductile but strong as it flew amongst the trees,
Leaves replying with a trill till the moon came up,
Shadows dancing on the now calm groove.
All was at peace.

The old man picked up his reed.  Someday he will learn
And emulate the sounds around into a coherent aria.


18 December 2020
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Hamilton Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Victor for your entry, congrats on a win!
Dome Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:58 AM
Wow this just so sublime and a work if wonderful art. Blown away by your talent. well done .what an inspiration. Pete.
Edmonds  Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 2:56 PM
A wonderful inspirational creation Victor, I’ve never thought before how man began to make music. Congratulations on poem of the day, well deserved. ~ ~ Belle
Eslinger Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 11:30 PM
A vibrant picture story. I actually have an unfinished story wondering also about music origin. I’ve studied cave art as start of human expression. Loved the compassionate way you presented the man. I’m sure of lots of your theory. Rapture & terror in wind music. Nice to meet you. ...sally
Crabtree Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Wonderful poem written perfectly, Victor. Hope you have a great week :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:35 PM
What a creative piece! Love it, Victor! Congratulations are in order I see! <3
Bayles Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Good going. This poem tells a good story.
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 8:26 AM
I see many congrats here so I guess it was an entry into a contest. Way to go ...Congrats on your winner. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for dropping by my page about the stinky Christmas tree. There was not singing in my house that night. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 11:45 AM
No contest. ~Just a POTD. Sorry. ~~
Mcintosh Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 2:10 AM
Again... Love this. C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S on POTD!!! God bless you
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:50 AM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Victor. Like a seasoned musician you have ably conducted your 'orchestra'. ~ Wishing you a Blessed Christmas. // paul
Williams Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:29 AM
Great story telling as always Victor. Congratulations on your POTD, well deserved....Maria Hugs
Fenn Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 12:01 AM
Cool poem! Congrats on your POTD!
Seeker Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Wow! So beautifully portrayed! Congrats on POTD
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 6:39 PM
such an interesting write from you, Victor. I see you got a POTD as well. BIG congrats, and well deserved.
Nicole Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Oh my !! I love everything about this. There is something Magical about the Wind- moments that surround the night. I love the melody it creates. It becomes.. Poetry in Motion. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Many Wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Nature’s music is the best and most peaceful. A beautiful expression of how it must have been before we began making our own music Victor. Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored with POTD my friend! Blessings xxoo
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:16 PM
you are a gifted storyteller Victor, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Downing  Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Hello Vic, brilliant poem, and congratulations on POTD...
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Victor, congrats on POTD _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Beautiful" story/write. Nature makes wonderful music, if we will only listen. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
Kettle Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Really liked this poem, made me think of the good times at the cottage, listening to the frogs, crickets and Whippoorwills. Congrads enjoy the weekend
Ashley Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Nature's symphony is indeed inspiring and after reading your brilliant poem, I have no doubt that the creation of man-made music happened this way... The magic of your gifted pen enchants my heart's imagination, Victor. Congratulations for your well-deserved recognition with POTD honors with this beautifully orchestrated piece. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Jayasankar Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 7:10 AM
Great imaginative story Victor. Congrats on POTD. God bless. Have a great day. ~ Ani
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Masterfully penned dear poet! Congratulations on POTD vb! xomo
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