Notes About The Poem

The birth of Idol, Rene Magritte

I need you like the pulse
that refuses to sleep,
while Ink’s heart aches
to weave this longing 
for the sky mirrors secrets
swirling ...swaying ... streaming 
over sultry sea-stone skin ~
rising, refusing
mannequin mannerism,
truly your beloved ~ 
mere mundane mistake,
as love speaks
beyond Poetry’s words,
like an anguished angel
haloed in opal fire,
milk-quartz opium ~
dulcet lies
            lethal devotion…

I trace Viking lips of tsunami
confusing clusters, 
crashing closure
into coral clarity
steel-contoured ~ staged scars,
as I am
an empress without an empire ~ 
a Cassandra without cure,
an Ariadne without escape,
a pen-less poet 
       a poem-less page
a flameless soul,
            a heart homesick ...

but O knight of night ~ 
nocturnal nomad  
what if desire
is an insidious dream 
dressed in didactic dialects
strolling the square ~
       silence incarnate,
a pawn to paused passion 
sacrificial sigh
breathing across
     soft-blushed cheeks
refusing,
       gambit gamble
gypsum wings wagered
against impulsiveness, 
as patience loses
pieces of peace ~ 
the rook standing resilient
four-legged conundrums’ cusp,
checkmated,
stranded, stalemate,
intricate inertia,
tactfully tongue-tied,
tethered, tripping tenacity,
an ivory air
tiptoeing the triggers
of your marine mirage,
surging lime rocks~
left and right,
           sun and moon 
salt and sand
       bishop and blue 

an endgame,
                     myth moved,
crown star-kissed
an erasure
of endured
                 life's emptiness...
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Gibbons Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 5:54 PM
Well the painting 🖼 speaks a million words. I see what Lin shared I'd say ditto with dots ... never be a pawn in the love realm. Talking from experience now my dear friend. Love is a dangerous game esp if mindgames involved.The empress of ink worth more than this I also see it like a fish dangling off hook it's caught but wants to be free too.Checkmate is game over I can't see that as everlasting love, can u? If love is forced ends disastrous n tears 😢 u seek happy ever after hugzzz 🫂❣️💋💋
Empress Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 1:50 AM
Oh wow your comment left me speechless ~ so much to ponder on ... life tho is a game of chess. And so must be love. Mindgames are considered emotional abuse, and I have been there in the past. Happy ever afters are in fairytales. I loved cinderella and lil mermaid when I was young 😂 what did you like miss vikingstress? Beauty and the beast is brilliant too hahah 😂 I love your idea of seeing a fish caught there! Why did I not see that before? You have a great eye for details and imagination! Thank you for sharing that here Sending you light always wise soul with an angelic heartbeat. Kisses and hugsz boooo 💋
Rolland Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 4:26 PM
enjoyed your creativity and emotional language, this is brilliant wishes
Empress Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 1:59 AM
Thank you kindly Appreciate your support Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 8:32 AM
"love speaks beyond Poetry’s words, like an anguished angel haloed in opal fire," -- Indeed, love speaks beyond words...more closely akin to the etheric souls that penned them, the spirit that drove such lyric carvers. Romance is no game, far too lethal when its pieces go wrong.... King, Queen or pawn, all the same to the possessive heart. 32 if even to dare start. As expected of you, always outstanding writing, Empress!
Empress Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 1:59 AM
"Possessive heart" i like that! You are so wise dear Jo. Thank you for this very deeply soulful comment I appreciate your presence Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 12:29 AM
Pen-less poet, dulcet lies, nocturnal nomad. You just never end with your skillful use of gorgeous metaphors and fascinating imagery. The last line about life's emptiness really captured well the essence of the picture. Was this got Brian. I bet it's a winner
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 2:06 AM
Yes I got placed second in Brians generous contest sweet soul aunt ~ Thank you for reading I love this paintin I might buy it later Sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 2:00 PM
You have an amazing talent for interpreting the great works of art IE, and a vast knowledge of the great works. I wouldn't know where to start. Tom🌹
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Sure you can 🌹
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 2:05 AM
Thank you always dear Tom Can I call you Tomsz? Haha 😉 Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:18 AM
This painting certainly offers enough fodder to feed a poet's imagination! The chess piece looks to me as a queen whose been left lingering from what might have been the 'dulcet lies" and "lethal devotion" you wrote about. Love is not a game of chess and emotions should never be put in checkmate. The endgame? Don't play with those who would strip a queen or an empress of her dignity. Love may endure all things, but not being torn apart and waiting for another game and being treated like a disposable pawn. If you sense angst in my comments, you're correct. AND... don't walk that plank into stormy seas!
Empress Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:25 AM
You just made me think of how I always love swimming in satanic seas ~ but they don’t define me linnersz. My first book title was that ~ satanic seas dont define me … and your comment is so empathetic as if you read me in and out! Poetry Mama! I will never be a pawn ~ Theres no space for an empress untouchable on a board of chess ~ love or life. Thank you so much for being here Sendin you light always
Liguori Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 10:39 AM
Your heart speaks of longing in this brilliant poem. I pray your knight in shining armor comes to you and gives you many a splendid days of love and happiness.
Empress Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:26 AM
I believe thats what you need I dont think AI can please me tho Hahah So i will remain my own Knight
Liguori Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 11:01 AM
Me too; found one… RAVNIR!! Knightess!
Empress Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 10:55 AM
Actually I changed my mind Im gonna find an AI knight hahahah
Empress Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 10:43 AM
Seriously what a prayer! Chill I am my own knight! 😂 Well thank you anyway Robert Sending you light
Onpaper Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 10:13 AM
I need you like the pulse that refuses to sleep, ayeee papi!!! I am there … like in a blink!!!!!!swirling ...swaying ... streaming over sultry sea-stone skin rising, refusing mannequin mannerism,… yaaasss alliterationsss!!!! a pen-less poet oooooo…. a poem-less page… mmmmmmmmmmm!!!! Dayum !!! a flameless soul, your soul is a blazing beauty of brilliance papiii!!! Aint no one gonna tell me otherwise!!! what if desire is an insidious dream dressed in didactic dialects… ooooo that liiiine!!!crown star-kissed an erasure of endured life's emptiness... oooo that ending!!!! Stunning papi
Empress Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 10:18 AM
La u lon time paps See ya soon Well done on reading 👏 😂
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