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The Birds and the Bees "Closely-Knit Trio"

The Birds and the Bees A “Closely-Knit” Trio The macho He-man Entered the Bar to Inspect the local female population Red- Dressed, Sultry “ladies” sat And sipped wine Not giving him one glance Drawing closer To a trio of High-heeled Enticing “women” Big Joe tried to Engage one in conversation Evasively she lit a cigar and said, “Sorry, but our threesome suits us just fine” Acrostic for Carol’s “The Birds and the Bees” Contest

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Date: 9/10/2010 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations dearest Carolyn on your win in my contest with this superb poem. Thank you for entering it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:26:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your win in Carol's contest.. Hope your Friday will be a stunning one.. love Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:24:00 AM
wowser! what a cool take on the write, great win very unique! Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:14:00 PM
Great write. Many many congrats for this wonderful win.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:23:00 PM
hahaha, this was a pure original! congrats, Carolyn. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:38:00 PM
Great poem and congratulations Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:33:00 PM
Carolyn, How wonderful that your entry won second place! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love, Connie
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:39:00 PM
love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:35:00 PM
Short and sweet but wonderfully conceived and composed Acrostic. Congratulations for the second place in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn! A cool job for cool second place! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:29:00 PM
I love your clever story of the birds and the bees!! Congratulations Carolyn, on your well deserved win! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:09:00 PM
congrats on this wonderful winning poem, Carolyn. Harry
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Date: 8/24/2010 11:53:00 AM
I loved your take on The Birds and The Bees. And the twist at the end is wonderfully imaginative and funny. And thank you the great comment on my recent contest winner. Much appreciated.
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Date: 8/19/2010 2:32:00 PM
This was terrific Carolyn you got a good chance to win.Thanks for the encouridgment.Teresa
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:10:00 PM
Cool, my lady, cool hand Luke didn't score much with the ladies in this one though. Nice to be back, Carolyn. I had withdrawal symtoms after th first day. Smile! Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:29:00 AM
Sounds like some scenes from my youth at Long Island bars. Evocative! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:12:00 AM
This is superb. It is witty and it is layered. Nicely done with this, dearheart. This is one of your best ones, I think! Regards, Gerard. Soup Mail later.
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:15:00 PM
Could have called this, Poor big Joe. excellent as usual, such imagery, good luck in the contest, Carolyn. Harry
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Date: 8/7/2010 6:58:00 PM
I really think Joe went into the wrong bar. But that's life. So is this poem. Good write. Charles
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:48:00 PM
hey creative maybe i'll get in this one, pray for me carolyn. love john
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:28:00 PM
Well a definite different approach that should do well in the contest...Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:00:00 PM
Bummer! I guess he should go home and dress in drag then go back and try again!:)
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Date: 8/7/2010 11:39:00 AM
Hey! Them women wore the pants in that situation. Good write. LOve,Dave
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:37:00 AM
Lets "light up " LNC..you are so funny...I would never have thought to put this slant on the contest...Good for you..BG
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:29:00 AM
Now where can I find this bar, mm. I like this one Carolyn. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
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