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The Birds

Went to the store for some things I forgot,
driving into the Walmart parking lot,
spied tons of seagulls,
so ran like a bull,
a passerby looking like Alfred Hitchcock.









12-19-16

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Mike Hauser

December 20, 2016 at 7:52 AM

Hahaha!

Cheryl Hoffman

December 20, 2016 at 9:28 AM

Glad made you laugh Mike!:)

Kim Rodrigues

December 20, 2016 at 7:16 AM

LOL...I had this happen, one time, on a walk. Geese all over the street! Respectfully, I went the other way! I think I saw Hitchcock walk by, as well. After all, he always shows up :) Smiling at your poem, Cheryl! I can see you running like a bull p!

Cheryl Hoffman

December 20, 2016 at 9:28 AM

Its strange because it makes you wonder why they would "hang out" at a Walmart parking lot; I think I would have preferred them to be geese! Glad you liked it and thanks for kind visit~Che :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 19, 2016 at 3:43 PM

I B runnin' too, Cheryl. Great limerick. Even dusted off an old cinema classic. Good stuff. Have a happy holiday, my dear. Love always.

Cheryl Hoffman

December 19, 2016 at 8:38 PM

I just don't care for the no eyeballs dead in the hallway scene! Glad you liked it Freddie and hope you have a happy holiday too~Peace & love, Che

Maurice Rigoler

December 19, 2016 at 9:18 AM

Haha! Good limerick, Cheryl. Grant Wood's "American Gothic" is one of my very favorite American paintings! I've written a few Clerihews about it. Thanks for the stop by. / M

Cheryl Hoffman

December 19, 2016 at 8:36 PM

Thank you for your stop by too Maurice; glad you liked my silly limerick and like the American Gothic painting as well!:)