The Bird in Black

I strolled onto a forest glade
to hear a bird in concert serenade,
but when I heard him speak, 
this issued from his beak,

"I'm not the bird you seek.

Some birds with pretty voices sing,
while those of broken heart and broken wing 
have no worm on which to snack.

Some birds wear colors, bright, 
and look so beautiful in flight,
while the hapless hit a wall and..."smack!". 

But, I'm no such bird.  This inky crow
(while there are birds that don't know which way to go,
in this world of birdy woe)
won't sing like Perry Co-MO,
or flaunt the colors of the rainbow. 
I am the bird in black."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 5:36 PM
Haha. Perry CO MO. Always enjoy your quirky poems
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 3:37 PM
love the flow toward a subtle humor. Faving.
Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Empress Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:18 AM
I know i should not smile at the line “ while the hapless hit a wall and..."smack!". ” hah poor birdie that hits the wall! Gosh! I wish i can save them all! I must say I find it quite cool the “ bird in black” so deep and evocative! And whenevr someone writes inky, I feel like they had me in their mind lolol anyway. I love the lines “Some birds with pretty voices sing, while those of broken heart and broken wing have no worm on which to snack.” Made me feel so deeply! You are so very soulful ~ pleasure reading you today dear David. Sending you light always
Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Ink. Haha, no, I'm glad you smiled there! Lots of my poems include humor that's not quite appropriate. In extreme cases, I have the sense to censor myself. I guess I"ve been spending a lot of time on PS, because when I used the word "inky" I also thought of you!
Jones Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:53 AM
Enjoyed reading about this bird. I have a question who or what is Perry Co MO?
Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 5:26 PM
Haha, I think I just unwittingly revealed my age. You and Ink are too young for my reference! Perry Como was a crooner popular in the 1960s!
Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 5:23 PM
Haha, I think I just unwittingly revealed my age. You and Ink are too young for my reference! Perry Como was a crooner popular in the 1960s!
Empress Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:19 AM
Same when you find out lemme know too haha
Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:13 AM
"The Bird in Black" was a creative write. A joy to read. Have a lovely day/week writing away............
Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 5:14 PM
Thanks, Paula!
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