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The Bird Cage

THE BIRD CAGE she warms her cage with sweetest sound bars and flowing gold surround the mood of those folk scattered about is fraught with lazy laughter no matter a stranger – the bird the song the flowing gold will capture oh the bird has more more than just one tune she sings of joy or songs of gloom whatever she chirps the sound contagious her nightly fans at times outrageous on pity the songstress no happy lot being caught within bars she’d rather not Dave Austin

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Date: 6/3/2016 2:45:00 PM
A lovely write, Daver! But oh, I do know entirely how that bird would feel. I'm going away for a happy weekend!. “Where should I go?" -Alice. "That depends on where you want to end up." - The Cheshire Cat.” For myself, I want to end up free for always. I am weary of these outrageously stupid games. Love you more and bigger than that swampy dinosaur turtle.:) Hugs, Mikki
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Daver Austin
Date: 6/4/2016 1:46:00 PM
You are definitely through the looking glass, dear mikki. Love, daver
Date: 5/26/2016 3:19:00 PM
Great poem here Daver. Really good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:36:00 PM
I have always enjoyed the bird in the golden cage metaphor. you did it very nicely, my friend . Are you enjoying warm weather now? We had too much rain this month. uggggg
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/26/2016 10:18:00 AM
Oh God yes! 89 yesterday. Love, daver
Date: 5/24/2016 3:17:00 PM
Lovely collection daver.
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/25/2016 2:43:00 PM
Lovely collection of alcoholics, eh. Thanks for the visit. Love, daver
Date: 5/24/2016 1:27:00 PM
so poignant!.. a birds sings more beautifully when uncased and free... ohh, so fine, dave..huggs
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/25/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks for reading my beer and pretzels. Love, daver

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