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The Bird

I am a bird I learnt to fly Because i had no choice It was simply my destiny. Fear, survival and the need to live, pushed me out my nest and carried upwards and onwards. Souring above, so much opportunities, so much freedom. Learning and living i am alive. I am a bird I have courage and i have desire, Seeking and searching, horizons far and wide, Beautiful wonder, mines to fly. I am a bird

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Date: 1/16/2017 11:29:00 AM
A praise worthy flight with The bird in realm of poetry. I too wrote a poem with the same title.
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Date: 9/7/2016 2:02:00 PM
GOOD FLYING, ANGELICA,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:01:00 AM
It's a good copy, Amgelika Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Angelika Stanczyk
Date: 8/31/2016 11:05:00 AM
Hi Skat A. Thank you so much for the friendly greeting. I look forward to becoming more familiar with you all on this platform. Will be posting new samples soon. :)

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