Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Poet Free verse

The Bird

There is a bird 
inside your heart
that's singing to the moon
all melodies 
of lives around you
friends around you
and all you cherish

Just listen to the bird
when it does not whistle
but sings a melody
or talks
or whispers
desperately
sad songs in your ears

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Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 4:29 PM Voahanitriniaina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 5, 2016 at 12:33 AM well done

Lucilla Carrillo February 1, 2014 at 9:38 PM I love this - a bird inside my heart. This is very sweet. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux November 8, 2013 at 1:13 PM Good morning Hanitra, just a note to say you are on my mind.

Joseph Matose October 28, 2013 at 10:04 AM Hannitra!! Missing in action! I like your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Friend.JM

Jack Horne October 27, 2013 at 1:28 PM lovely write, my friend

Joseph May October 25, 2013 at 1:09 PM a lovely melody indeed....nicely penned Hanitra....thanks for your kind comments on my poems...best wishes Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 25, 2013 at 2:43 PM My pleasure, dear Joseph! Have a nice weekend! Blessings, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux October 23, 2013 at 9:16 AM Sometimes it sings sad songs that I can't get out of my head. It appears I had missed a number of your poems, I am so glad I stopped by today to read them. Have a most excellent day Hanitra. Blessings and hugs to you. Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 25, 2013 at 12:19 PM Many thanks, dear Rick! Don't worry, I know you are very busy with your poetry and I'm very happy for that! Keep on writing so creatively, especially in collabs; your communicative skills are so unique, we have to use them! Love, Hanitra

Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2013 at 7:11 AM - So sweet and lovely poem !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 25, 2013 at 12:22 PM Thanks so much for your visit, dear Anne Lise! Love, Hanitra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 22, 2013 at 1:00 PM A lovely, poignant poem, Hanitra! I enjoyed reading and thank you so much for your kind comments today! Love and blessings, Rrhonda

Eileen Manassian October 22, 2013 at 12:46 PM Lovely poem...Yes...the bird sings beautifully...If only we will listen...Lovely poem. Thank you, my dear, for you lovely comments. You are sweet and kind...I've answered you post on my latest...Have a look...hugs!!!

Monterey Sirak October 13, 2013 at 7:41 AM this poem is perfect in its simplicity and truth. Loved it.

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2013 at 4:11 PM this one is very wistful. I rather like it!!

David Williams October 12, 2013 at 12:52 PM hanitra, I think there is a bird hidden within each of us and all too often we do not hear the right notes,this is a just reminder... very well written....David