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It woke me from my sleep today- banging, flapping on my window. And when I heard it, I surmised that bird returned to try again. Bang after bang- it would not stop- every day, it tried and tried- not knowing glass prevented it from entering expanse it saw. June 14, 2021 Contest: Workshop- Adjectives Deleted Sponsor: Jack Webster

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Date: 7/12/2021 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2021 12:53:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the video. God bless you.
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Date: 6/15/2021 11:46:00 AM
That sometimes happens when something is erected blocking a traditional flight pattern, especially to one's nest. Well said and done!
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