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The Birchbark Trees

The birchbark trees Stan high on a hill Each one had a trim Their tops parts removed As the time went by Slowly the limbs grew They began to sprout Branches and green leaves Now its autumn Their leaves have turned brown Hanging to the bough Ready to fall off

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Date: 10/28/2022 2:56:00 PM
Regrouping, Renewal and Regrowth. The cycle of life, seen in the birchwood trees. Very nice! :) Gershon
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/29/2022 11:39:00 AM
Hello Gershon, the birchbark tree is one of my favourtie trees. Thank you Gershon. I hope all is with you. Enjoy yur day my friend.
Date: 10/24/2022 8:37:00 PM
Hello Darlene, i am okay,think you.God Bless.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2022 10:26:00 AM
Hello Mulu, I am glad to hear it. God Bless.
Date: 10/24/2022 3:33:00 AM
Hello Darlene,a lovely autumn poem. God Bless you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2022 4:16:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. God Bless. Darlene
Date: 10/23/2022 3:31:00 PM
As the days get shorter and cooler, life simply slows down; in fact, frost has already appeared in the mornings on the eastern side, signaling the official start of winter. The onset of winter is rapidly approaching. Stunning poem for the season of autumn, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2022 4:20:00 AM
Hello Sotto, it gets dark here early in the evening. It is too dark in the morning. I do not like that. Yesterday was a warm day. Indian summer. It won't last long. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/23/2022 12:25:00 PM
- Autumn is here ... and nature goes to sleep ... we already have frost at night ... winter is near ... A great autumn poem, Darlene :) - hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2022 4:25:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, we are in Indian Summer.. A humid day yesterday. I was raking leaves. It gets dark early in the evening. I wake up in darkness. I rather wake up in daylight. God Bless.Darlene Hugs

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