The Bicycle Lesson

For half an hour, 
he was a few feet in front of me,
trying to tame the little metal beast,  
jittery under the torrent of none-too-gentle 
dos and don'ts coming from me, 
his 6-year-old legs getting bullied by the pedals, 
his hands on the handlebars fighting the side-to-side 
spasms of the front wheel,  
all four limbs wrestling with the fear in his mind. 

Then, suddenly, he was 20 feet ahead of me,
then 50, 80,
the short sleeves of his oversized tee-shirt flapping like 
fledging wings,
his neck and arms looking especially scrawny in the
horizontal lift-off, 
hair gelled by the newfound wind into an 
aerodynamic crown, 
all of him flying down the promenade of the 
dusky park. 

The world has many lessons in store to replace 
the things I’ve tried 
to teach him through the years.

Just not this one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/22/2021 3:40:00 PM
Beautiful. This is a keeper. I remember when I first pulled away from my father holding the back of my little bike and lifted off for the first time. And how happy (and a bit scared) I was when I realized he had let me go.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/23/2021 2:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Eric. Stay safe.
Date: 6/14/2019 8:08:00 PM
This one stands alone Bernard. Hope you have are safe as we are hearing what is developing over there. Regards David in NZ
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Bernard Chan
Date: 6/14/2019 11:15:00 PM
Hi David, thanks a lot. How are you doing with the treatment? Sending my thoughts for a speedy recovery. We are fine over here. I actually just got back from a short holiday. I think there's going to be another march tomorrow, hopng there'll be another 1 million+ people. My wife and I will probably join. Have to make a stand, even though they will eat up this place sooner or later :)
Date: 5/17/2019 8:35:00 AM
oh! This is awesome! I'm teared up ;) xomo!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/17/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen :)
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