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The Better of Us

She's in there sleeping As she does most days God may I have I pray One last talk with her I would tell her Of her beauty And of our grand times She would remember we are in love God she must be with you Only her body stays I wish it were me in that hell For she is the better of us She is in there sleeping Searching for the dawn

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Date: 3/1/2022 9:22:00 AM
Wow, very poignant ~
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/1/2022 6:51:00 PM
thank you Line.
Date: 2/13/2022 4:20:00 PM
This makes my heart ache. I will pray for her, and you. This is a precious poem of your love and devotion to her, I'm sorry for this deep heartache and pain.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/14/2022 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much BJ!

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