Maurice Yvonne Poet Free verse

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For my two daughters nineteen and twenty-two years old. They have taught me so much and have made me a better man. I use to tell them when they were young "If I asked heaven for two perfect daughters they would not have even near as amazing as you"! I love my daughters with every pore of my body. I am blessed!

The Best Poem I'Ve Ever Read

I learnt a long time ago.....art depends on how the person
experiencing your work perceives it...........so please don't
get upset...........how someone............judges your poetry
it is but the perception of one person..........a singular look
how one person looks at what you wrote....... .....when my
daughter...when my daughter was five........only five years
old...she built me....... .......a poem..........that is what she
told me.."daddy I built you a pome".....I can tell you it is to
this day the best poem I have ever read.....better than any
of the masters...........better than any famous modern poet
even Shakespeare....could not compete...... ....with a poem
written......by a five year old girl.............I will share it with
you now...you may or may not agree with me........that it is
the best poem you ever read......the poem my five year old
daughter built for me is this..."daddy i love you so so much"
...she even included an internal rhyme..."so"with "so"and to
this very day...........it is the best poem.....I have ever read
so you see....art is subjective....it lives based on perception

01~22~2015
With My Love
    Armand

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John Fleming November 5, 2015 at 2:18 PM There is nothing more touching or endearing than that of a Soul that places its trust in you unconditionally and without question. No one person could ever be accorded a higher tribute than when carrying this sacred trust entrusted unto their care. Stay safe, Armand, my friend...stay safe. My warmest regards...always. :) john

Poet Destroyer A April 8, 2015 at 2:06 PM WOW, that is the best poem ever. Armand... I love your poetry the most, when you are being honest... God Bless, this poem and your heart for sharing what your 5-year-old wrote for you. Them words are priceless... XOX..Linda

Debbie Guzzi April 2, 2015 at 5:08 PM And you so wise to know a gift when you see it! Light & Love

Robert Lindley March 30, 2015 at 7:57 AM Best writing I ever read was the letter my daughter at 21 years old wrote me , thanking me for never leaving her and always being there for her no matter the costs!I have left in my will that cherished note be buried with me when I go deep six. We are no more than is our capability to love others.. Great write my friend! A7

Barbara Attaway March 25, 2015 at 2:02 PM That is one beautiful poem your five year old daughter wrote to you! And yours...to honor her...and to also offer a bit of wisdom... is just as beautiful! I don't get here as often as I would like...but when I do...I always look your name up and read what you have here. I enjoy the way you write. Thank you.

Emile Pinet March 23, 2015 at 11:21 AM That was sweet and just human enough to be easily relatable, Your words where enchanting and you pulled off a great bit of poetry. Emile. #7

Paul Callus January 30, 2015 at 4:17 PM I am moved by this touching write of yours, Armand. I still keep all the bits and pieces that my daughter gave me when she was very young. And, yes, we must not take judgment too seriously for tastes vary. #7 // paul

Harry Horsman January 30, 2015 at 3:33 PM You say it so well yes the poetry the sentiment the truth...

Seren Roberts January 28, 2015 at 4:35 PM as you have treasured these words for past 15 years, so you will treasure them for the rest of your life, as I will treasure the words we wrote together....Seren

David Meade January 26, 2015 at 10:15 AM I have three daughters and your words are so true and powerful. They are precious gifts . . . Love deeply these girls my dear friend. 7

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 25, 2015 at 11:10 AM So very, very sweet and precious! No words could ever compare. I'm sure she remembers writing those special words to you. You are blessed, Armand. Big hug, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2015 at 9:57 AM I love it! You have excellent taste in poetry my friend.

Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 3:40 PM I loved this...I keep the notes my daughter has written to me over the years. They are so precious...you are right. Nothing compares. Lovely write, my dear. HUGS

Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 2:27 PM Out of the mouth of babes... It is simply wonderful - a poem to treasure forever Armand :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton January 23, 2015 at 12:22 PM from the mouth of a small child there is nothing as wonderful Maurice I know you will treasure it for ever Hugs 7

Kelly Deschler January 23, 2015 at 12:32 AM You are absolutely right, Armand. How can we judge what each of us feels and loves in our own hearts? Everyone of us is unique, therefore our idea of what is best will differ. We have no right to argue with personal opinion... I loved your genuine expressions here, and what you think is best, is okay with me! A beautiful write, Armand!

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2015 at 11:22 PM CUTE CUTE CUTE, Armand. And PRECIOUS. you have to be one very adorable daddy to inspire this in your daughter. In contrast, my poor granddaughters do not enjoy their daddy very much. They are afraid of him because he just yells at them to be quiet all the time. it is sad when you know your daughter is married to a guy whose own kids do not feel for him the way your daughters feel for you, ARmand.

Charmaine Chircop January 22, 2015 at 6:32 PM How beautiful it is the heart of a child,how pure,how beautiful it is when someone we love says Iove you so so much,how difficult for grownups many a time to say and write such words..What can be more beautiful than the love of our children on paper.Im favouring your girl's poem today,dont be upset : )

Tim Smith January 22, 2015 at 6:20 PM That is a beautiful poem...keep it near and dear to your heart