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The Best Me

I want to be fuchsia free of Indigo inhibition Not so much that I silver sin But that I am emerald easygoing I want to walk whimsically Like purple peacocks along My destined path and lavender laugh To have hazel happiness I want to be such a sandy soul That others sink into my peace And ruby receive blueberry blessings Of love light and purest energy I want to grow such a halo Around my heart that God Is pleased and He anoints me In my wildest dreams I’d be the best me

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Date: 1/18/2025 10:31:00 AM
Interesting alliterations with color moods…some produce an image. Love the final verse, yes!
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/18/2025 2:30:00 PM
Kim so glad you like it!
Date: 1/17/2025 11:27:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Karen! This is poetry at its finest…
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/17/2025 11:44:00 AM
What a nice compliment! Thank you kindly Ilene!
Date: 1/17/2025 8:45:00 AM
Hi Karen, your poems certainly show the best of you. xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/17/2025 9:12:00 AM
You are kind John! Thanks
Date: 1/16/2025 8:44:00 PM
I like the beautiful motivation for goodness. This poem speaks of joy.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/16/2025 9:30:00 PM
Aw thanks Hilda! This form is one I struggle with so I am glad you like it!

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