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The Best Exercise

Your cold right now your body is still but let me warm you up and give you my fill slowly I enter you tremble surprised you got me all wet my body has raised You pleasure me hastily with your gentle waves I use my hands with their fingers to play with your face your swishing back and forth I've made you all wild How I love to take a swim in this pool for a while

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2009 11:16:00 PM
Such a tease.
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Date: 8/12/2009 11:18:00 AM
Oh my, excellent Jessica - where is this pool? >>James
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Date: 8/12/2009 9:48:00 AM
The word play in this poem is extradinary, well done, thank you for the comments on my work, keep writing, Mark
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:11:00 PM
Had me goin. TL
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Date: 8/11/2009 9:14:00 AM
Clever write! Sweet read, love the concept, swimming in a pool. Thanks for the comment! ~Jen~
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Date: 8/11/2009 9:00:00 AM
Goodness my friend.. I love this swim that you have taken...enjoyable read...
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