The Best Exercise

Your cold right now
your body is still
but let me warm you up
and give you my fill
slowly I enter 
you tremble surprised
you got me all wet
my body has raised
You pleasure me hastily
with your gentle waves
I use my hands with their fingers 
to play with your face
your swishing back and forth
I've made you all wild
How I love to take a swim
in this pool for a while
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chu Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 11:16 PM
Such a tease.
Fraser Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Oh my, excellent Jessica - where is this pool? >>James
Matthews Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 9:48 AM
The word play in this poem is extradinary, well done, thank you for the comments on my work, keep writing, Mark
Lewis Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Had me goin. TL
H. Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Clever write! Sweet read, love the concept, swimming in a pool. Thanks for the comment! ~Jen~
Higgins Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 9:00 AM
Goodness my friend.. I love this swim that you have taken...enjoyable read...
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