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The Bends

Diving deep underwater, mask on To hide your face, conceal your oxygen. You go deeper and deeper, not realizing How deep you’re going. Eventually, you come face to face with a marlin, But you see them as a carp. You can’t tell the difference between A carp and a marlin. You don’t see the marlin, rare as he is, And you mistake him for a carp. Well, this carp has a hook. A hook that will Plunge its way through your heart, Your soul, and your mind, and will Take everything out with it and swim As far away from you as possible after. But you don’t even realize it, because You’re not a fisherman. You can’t tell the difference between A carp and a marlin. And that will be your downfall.

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Date: 7/28/2021 8:18:00 AM
Ruby, I enjoyed the subtle metaphor in this piece. Nicely done. John
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Date: 6/26/2021 3:12:00 PM
Ruby, Feelin' pins and needles just reading your poem called 'The Bends'. Though sure enjoyed from the rippled surface, your hyperbaric write. -Richard
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Date: 6/26/2021 9:34:00 AM
Hello Ruby, I really like your metaphors also. Welcome to the soup. There's some excellent poets who are also wonderfully supportive. Have a great day.
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:30:00 AM
Hello Ruby Kelly, You know what ?I can tell the difference between the two either. Enjoy yur day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2021 7:30:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 6/4/2021 5:36:00 AM
Loved this poem and shows that diving deep is a dangerous thing.
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Date: 6/2/2021 4:06:00 PM
Heya Ruby, sorry for carping on, but as Carp are freshwater fish and marlin salt water, they probably never meet, I’m thinking this is a metaphoric write about certain dangerous people, and how deep we can get involved before discovering their true colours, A great enjoyable write, cheers David
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Ruby Kelly
Date: 6/2/2021 8:25:00 PM
Yes, David, that was actually the point that I had in mind while writing! The diver doesn't recognize the marlin and perceives it to be a carp when in reality it could never have been a carp as it could never be found in the ocean. It showcases the main character's ignorance toward the metaphorical "marlin". Thank you for the compliment, regardless! - Ruby.
Date: 6/1/2021 6:11:00 PM
Intriguing write, Ruby. Keep writing!! ~ Gershon
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Ruby Kelly
Date: 6/2/2021 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! Love your work, as well! - Ruby.
Date: 6/1/2021 1:30:00 PM
Amusing when one reads it out of the water, horrifying when someone experiences it under the water. I am lucky...I just read this fine and exhilarating poem, dearest Ruby. Blessings.
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Ruby Kelly
Date: 6/1/2021 1:52:00 PM
Haha, thank you, Demetrios! - Ruby.
Date: 6/1/2021 12:18:00 PM
Fine writing, Ruby. I don't dive, but I'm sure the deeps are treacherous.
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Ruby Kelly
Date: 6/1/2021 1:51:00 PM
hahahah I don't dive either, but it sure is a great subject for a poem! - Ruby.
Date: 6/1/2021 11:39:00 AM
Yet our government spends more on the military than any other nation and less on education! Take your congressional representatives on your next dive!
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Ruby Kelly
Date: 6/2/2021 1:41:00 PM
True as ever, Rico! Thanks for reading! -Ruby.
Date: 6/1/2021 11:09:00 AM
ohhh marlin...ive watched finding nemo!!!!!!!
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Ruby Kelly
Date: 6/1/2021 11:13:00 AM
Yes, Georgia, Finding Nemo is a great movie.

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